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im sort of with mouringmist. it's is a fast short chapter, but it's not entirely rushed. it's just short, and only one scene
I want blueblood to get karma beatdown
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Don’t we all?
oo.. luna becoming a deadly warrior! i likey... although Akira will have to tell her how katana and the like were forged. after all, it's no simple matter of reshaping steel of any kind. (perhaps looking up man at arms reforged on youtube for reference? if not for yourself, then for your readers)
they do the traditional method. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NhdFygUJOek
i realize the above is chinese origin, but they do have a kill bill and some other actual katana forges.
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It's no problem, it is pretty much the same thing as the katana. Perhaps he would explain to the actual bladesmiths and they figure out the specifics.
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tanks.
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Joking Query: Where? I don't see a tank!
My friend you are doing this wrong, you are telling the story as if it was a flashback, give the samurai personality, give him dialogues, reactions, feelings. He is your main character, not a memory of an unnecessary character. So far it feels like your are setting the baclground story, the problem is that there’s no follow up.
Bat Clan, batty batty batty don't let me down