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Good fir a first attempt decent pacing and for ther personality makes sense things would go fast but the I love you bits are to soon for a budding relationship if it's more a casual theme and not serious then I'd keep it casual until it becomes serious when it comes to the sex
I love it.
I'm cool with Spike flirting with any of the other female members (hell even Lulu and Tia, sky's the limit), but I hope that this could be a rare sight with Spike is monogamous with one mare. And I admit, it's probably too early for Spike to be chained to one mare only when there probably are more mares to meet. I will be STOKED when Vinyl and Octavia (preferably as 'partners' ) show up in this story and how they are gonna be in relation with Spike and the others.
Call me crazy, but I could really see a bit of a romantic rivalry between RD and Octavia--especially if Octavia turns out to be bi...hope that gives you some ideas...
Gotta go fast
Not a bad start for a first time clop scene.