• Published 16th Sep 2012
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Vampire Love (OC) - StoryWriter



A vampire mare found true love

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Chapter One - A Sparkling Instinct Finale

At Fluttershy cottage

(I don't really want to go all munchy-crunchy on the eating scenes so have a lame start! Because I'm lazy and bad at it)

The couple which have been invited to a private tea party was halfway through their meals and they have seemed to be enjoying the privacy they had quite well

Daisy taking a sip from the tea, feeling very secure and calm "This place is so peaceful.." as she enjoys the quietness the cottage give, birds singing and chirping about as they fly around the cottage or to a tree, and squirrels running around playing tag on the green grass

Winter "It really is.." as he gaze toward the sky, he sees the evergreen forest clouds moving and shaping themselves in the sky "I wonder if those clouds is what made her to stay here.." "Hey Daisy look at those clouds, That cloud over there, it looked almost like a pancake" as he pointed his hoof at a cloud of what has a shape of a flat round mushy circle

Daisy look at the sky at where Winter points at "Wow you're right I've never seen a cloud with a shape like that before.." she said in surprise

Both of them gazes at those clouds with curiosity and wonder because they never seen a cloud shaping or moving around by itself before. It felt almost like a dream for them to be together and gazing at the clouds that can actually shape themselves, And it also made it romantic since it is actually happening

As Daisy seeing various shapes of clouds, "Winter.. It is so, amazing.." she said with amazement

Winter "But.. It isn't as amazing as you are.." he looks at her

Daisy blushes slightly "Am I really that attractive to him?" the thought of marriage crossed her mind again making her blushing even more "No! I cannot marry him!" she covers her mouth with her hoof, looking timidly at him.

Winter look at the ground slightly embarrassed and confused, "Why am I acting so bold all of a sudden?"

Daisy "That tea worked so well on him- She look at his lips, suddenly she felt a desire to kiss him making her looking slightly seductive -Maybe a bit too well.." "Winter.." she approach him

Winter "Yes?"

Daisy kissed him softly on the cheek across the small wooden table, she then left him behind before things get more out-of-hand but before leaving she said, "Winter let's get going, its almost night and I don't want to upset my audience" she gives a slightly cheerful smile near the doorway

Winter frozen there for a moment, suddenly he felt a slight headache "My head..!" he raise both of his hoof to his head massaging it, soon he has flashbacks of her sister giving him a kiss on the cheek although unable to remember how she looked like

Daisy "Winter! Are you alright?" she moved away from the doorway

Winter "Don't worry I am fine -just having a slight headache.. Anyway lets go.." he said with slight pain in his voice while leaving the table, a moment later the animals goes up to the table to gobble up their leftovers especially the tea

Daisy "Are you sure you are fine?" she asked with worries in her tone

Winter "Of course I'm fine, It just a headache.. nothing to worry about" he said trying to sound normal

When both of them are on the road trotting back to Ponyville, Winter thoughts are in slight disarray while Daisy is having inner conflicts within her own conscience

Winter "What was that about.. That flashback.." he recalls the flashback he experienced then he thought of Daisy kissing him "And why when he kissed me that I suddenly get this headache?" he then have flashback of her blushed furiously, the memory also made him blushed

Daisy feeling slightly frustrated on the inside "... I really just can't do it, I'm a vampire I can't even reproduce so whats the point of marrying your little brother.." the thought of unable to marry him made her feel more frustrated than before "I wished he would just kiss me right now.." she thought, regretting her decision


In Ponyville somewhere in the sky

Rainbow Dash flying around in the sky doing her job by gathering the clouds and drags it around decorating the night sky, when she is done with her job, "Hah! All done, Now I'm sure that it would look good now!" when she lands on the ground and look at the beautiful sky she had decorated herself.. she then daydream about Soarin'

In Rainbow Dash house at night time, Soarin' and Rainbow is inside the house both of them are having conversation about Soarin' daily training routine. When Soarin' managed to make a joke out of his training routine both of them beginning to laugh, after they finished laughing Rainbow looked at the closed curtain wanting to show him something

Rainbow Dash "Hey Soarin' wanna go check out the sky? Its beautiful.." she trots near the window, opening the curtain for him to see

Soarin' "Wow it is beautiful!" he said with astonishment as he approaches the window seeing the beautiful night sky, both of them enjoyed the view for a few moment

Rainbow Dash "Don't you like it? I decorated it myself.." she timidly said

Soarin' chuckled "I like it.. But I like you even more.." he approaches her and kis- *POMFED*

She abruptly stopped daydreaming and then she saw that her wings have 'pomfed', she blushed intensely as well as kicking her into panic mode. She quickly look around for an escape route, when she found her escape route she immediately sprint forward at lightning speed only to crash into Fluttershy near The big Carriage

Fluttershy lay down on the floor dazed from the impact with Rainbow Dash on top of her. When Rainbow opens her eyes she saw that she is on top of Fluttershy, she immediately jolt her body up and off of her body "I'm sorry! Are you okay Fluttershy?" -She lift Fluttershy upper body off the ground- "you aren't hurt right? Wake up!" she shake her a little

Fluttershy snap out of it, half conscious "Rainbow why are you in such a hurry..?" she said weakly, her vision is blurry although she managed to see Rainbow wings have 'pomfed' "You have a.. a bon-"

Rainbow closes Fluttershy mouth "Don't say it!" she then looked around her, when she declared the area is clear of ponies she sighed heavily in relief

When Fluttershy appears to have fully regained her consciousness she said, "Um.. Could you please let go of me?" she blushed slightly

Rainbow chuckled nervously, "Sorry.." she then let go of her

Fluttershy "Um.. why are you here?"

Rainbow "I was about to ask you the same thing!" -She glance at her wings, its still erected- "Um.." she covers her wings with both of her hoofs

Fluttershy "Well.. I'm here to.. um.. take a look inside Daisy home.."

Rainbow "And I'm just racing around Ponyville!" she both bluffed and lied "...Why are you alone?"

Fluttershy "..I don't even know.."

Rainbow "What? Nevermind, But really Fluttershy you shouldn't be doing things like this alone in the night.. Aren't you supposed to be afraid of shadows?" she glance at her wings again, its not erected anymore and managed to regained full control of her wings

Fluttershy been reminded of her own fear that her entire body tenses up, "Um.. Maybe we could go in together?" she said with fear in her tone

Rainbow Dash sighed, "Fine.." she then trot toward the carriage door and opens it, inside the door is almost pitch black "I can't see anything.."

Fluttershy "Okay then.. Let's go home!" she trots away... then she trots back "Um.. I think I will stay here till you want to leave.."

Rainbow roll her eyes, she enter the Carriage only to make the entire interior to lit up which made Fluttershy body jumped a little, "Huh.. That's new, never heard of a spell that turns on the lights when entering"

Fluttershy trots in and said, "I- I guess.." feeling slightly relieved to be out of the dark, her eyes searches around the room

Rainbow "So what are you looking for?"

Fluttershy "Um.. I don't know.." An other worldly thought entered her mind, it whispered, "Family Album.." it doesn't sound evil but very calm "An.. a Family Album?"

Rainbow "What you want that for?" sounding bemused

Fluttershy "Because.. I'm curious about her life.."

Rainbow "Oh.. Now that you mentioned it I'm getting curious too, Anyway lets find that Album wherever she puts it" she begin to rummage through the bookshelves

Fluttershy just looking around only to notice a slightly cracked wooden chest near her, she opens it with her wings, she take a look inside it and saw a book on top of all the other objects below it "Is this the book?" she grasp the book firmly with both of her hoofs then she turn the book around seeing the title Family Album "Um.. Rainbow?"

Rainbow lift her head up away from the book she reading which is the Daring Do series she found on the bookshelves, "What is it?" she saw Fluttershy holding a book, "You found it?"

Fluttershy "Um.. Yes.."

Rainbow "Great now let's check it out!" as Fluttershy puts the book on the table, slowly she opens the album

As both of them look at the pictures they felt somewhat odd about it

Rainbow "...Somethiiing iss not right here.." she said slowly

Fluttershy "I think so too.."

Both of them look at the blue colt in the picture

Fluttershy "The colt seems familiar.."

Rainbow "And this white mare here is Daisy right?" she press her hoof against the white mare in the picture

Fluttershy "I think so.."

After a few moment of looking at the oddly familiar colt as well as the white mare, Both of them immediately realized Daisy is a vampire, Their faces lit up in shock and horror then they screamed

Rainbow said in slight disbelief, "I don't believe it, Daisy is a vampire! Quick we gotta tell twi about this!" she flies away at lightning speed out of the carriage

Fluttershy "WAIT don't leave me alone in here!" she look around the surroundings outside, it looked almost like a ghost town. Her entire body begins to shake as she is realizing she is all alone, she look around outside of the window only to see terrifying figures of a tree shadow that she startled herself, "AH!" she quickly closes the curtain and slams the door, after a few moments of breathing heavily she sighed in relief, "I guess I have to wait here.." her eyes glances at the album "But if Daisy is a vampire.. why didn't she kill me when I'm alone at my cottage?" the thought flared up her curiosity about Daisy that she begin to examine the pictures very closely in the album

As she examine the pictures she saw that the picture is very old, she then look at the colt He look so alike like Winter.. after that she examine the mare And this is Daisy.. she lift her head away from the album looking at all the pictures one by one, including the hoofwritings. It made her feel rather sorry for them "Maybe Daisy is just trying to spend some time with her little brother.."

A loud boom is heard, its intensity is even strong enough to make the carriage shake a little with some dust falling from the carriage ceiling, Fluttershy also jumped in surprise although she looked less shocked this time "What was that?" she rashly said

(You : Aren't this suppose to be a tragic story?)

(you know a tragic story doesn't mean that all of it has to be tragic sometimes tragedy only happens when a story is nearing its end, it also depends on how the plot is formed.)


Rewind to when Rainbow is still working

As Winter and Daisy trots in the main district of Ponyville, both of them gazed at the sky for a moment

Winter "The star is rather beautiful tonight.."

Daisy giggled "I haven't stargazed for so long that I forgot how beautiful the sky can be at night"

Winter "How long exactly?" he said slightly shocked

Daisy "Well.. I don't want to say it.."

Winter "... Is something bothering you?"

Daisy "No.. Its not that.. Its something else.." she said, can't help herself but sounding very lovesick

Winter hearing her tone of voice made him feel worried about her, he said, "Well if you need me just call my name and I will be there for you.. Alright?"

Daisy feels cherished hearing him saying that, but she also feels depressed that she cannot be herself, "... I wish.. that I can just be myself in front of you... I don't want to lie to you... but I don't want to tell the truth either..." "That's very sweet of you.." she said, in a sweet nostalgic tone

When Winter and Daisy arrived at schoolhouse they saw a lot of ponies gathering near the stage while some is still paying for the tickets at the counter which have been set up by the workers, each tickets cost five bits per pony, it has filled up almost two chest on the counter, The atmosphere here is filled with excitement as the ponies kept on chattering

Daisy turns around to face Winter, "Well I have to go now.. You will watch me right?" she asked

Winter "Of course I will" he answered in return

Daisy trots toward the Schoolhouse while Winter trot towards the counter to buy a ticket, though Winter glanced at her feeling uncomfortable just to leave her like that, he stops in his track and secretly prays "Princess of the Sun, who nurture us with light and warmth, I pledge you to use all of your might to protect her and make sure she is out of harm's way..."

Inside the Schoolhouse is Mayor Mare sitting on a chair, she is slightly worried about Daisy and that she delayed the show for a while, when she saw Daisy near the doorway her worries are gone

Mayor Mare "Oh there you are, I was worried you won't come back"

Daisy "Am I late?" she magically put on her magician costumes that is in her saddlebag, when she's fully dressed she put the saddle onto her back

Mayor stand up and said, "A little, please follow me I will show you the backstage to prepare yourself with any needed equipment" she lead Daisy out of the schoolhouse

Daisy "I already have mine.." she kindly objected

Mayor "Oh so you have? But with a bag that small I don't think you would be able to entertain our audience enough"

Daisy glance at her saddlebag then back to her, "I guess you had a point"

As they enter the backstage through the backdoor the area is pretty much lit up and is filled with magic tools

Mayor "Do you know how to use these tools?"

Daisy "Well all of them seems familiar to me, I might have no problem"

Mayor "Good! Also do you know when to make an entrance?"

Daisy "I think I know"

Mayor "Excellent, Now I will go outside and announce that the show is about to start"

Daisy tries to prepare a spell to make an entrance, although the talisman glowed and for some reason it prevented her spell from been detected by the detection spell

As the Mayor appears on the stage she said, "Mares and Gentlecolts, I thank you all for coming. And I am pleased to announce that the delay is over and the show will start very soon!" the crowd below begins to cheer with excitement as Mayor Mare trots down from the stage

As the drums plays and the spotlights moving around the big red curtain, up comes a big smoke, slowly it revealed Daisy dressed in her beautifully created magician outfit which have made some stallions to fall in love with her

Daisy "Thank you all for waiting!" she nearly shouted acting like somepony else, she teleported a bird cage that is on top of a small wooden table, a wood shaped like a crate plus a bigger crate, and a big thin blanket on the small wooden table "Now.. Shall I begin my show?" acting high and mighty, the way she acted drives the crowd slightly wild thanks to her outfit

When Winter managed to brought a ticket from the counter and joined the crowd, he tried to push his way toward the stage to get a close look at Daisy performing her tricks but he is surprised to see Twillight Sparkle among the crowds with her other friends, from afar they seem to be having conversation with her friends that is Rarity,Pinkie Pie and Applejack. he felt himself slightly bemused at the sight of that insane lavender unicorn showing expression of what seemed like a mixture of doubt and frustration "That crazy unicorn I met the other day... What's she thinking now?" he pondered, when Twillight take notice of Winter she trot up to him while also trying to squeeze through the crowd, leaving her friends behind

When Twillight reached to him she said, "Hello Winter.."

Winter "Hello to you, and I don't feel like talking to you right now how about later?" he said in a plain manner

Twillight "Alright," -her face turns remorseful- "and sorry.. for what I said last time.."

Winter "She's apologizing?" ".... Well.. its alright.."

Twillight "No! Its not alright.. I mean we didn't even let you live the life you wanted to and we didn't even let you build your relationship peacefully! I even asked you weird and outrageous questions because of my stupid instinct!"

Winter sighed letting a few moment of silent between her as both of them watches Daisy swung the levitated blanket over the tiny wood block, turning it into the shape of a dove "That's why she thinks she is a vampire?" "Well.. She isn't a vampire.. I even slept in her carriage, If she is a vampire she would have sucked me dry by now.. and I wouldn't even be here too"

After hearing what he said, Twillight expression of doubt and hidden frustration evaporated from her face and are replaced with relief and slight cheerfulness, knowing that her instinct was wrong "Wow.. You're such a lucky stallion to have her as a marefriend, And I also heard that she is very interested in you" as she watch Daisy on the Stage

Winter blushed "Really?!" he said in astonishment "Is that why she kissed me?" thinking back to when Daisy kiss him on the cheek. Daisy covers the bird cage after she puts the wooden dove into it

Twillight "Well.. I don't actually know, My friend Rarity told me that so I cannot be sure if it is true or not.."

As Daisy levitates the blanket, uncovering the bird cage, it revealed a living dove resting on the swing inside it calmly, she then covers the giant wood entirely, Daisy concentrates very hard that the giant wood floats slightly into the air and changing its shape into what seemed to be a pony before she quickly pulls the blanket off, Winter felt his body switching places between the wooden statue incredibly fast that it is almost instant, In fact Twillight was quite surprised to see his body turned into wood as well only to be more surprised to see him on the stage however for Winter, it was an unpleasant experience for him, it made him slightly nauseous but his stomach is strong enough to hold it in

Daisy "?.." she blushed when she saw that she accidentally summoned Winter onto the stage "Tha- that can't be right! It supposed to turn that statue into a puppet! Why did it switch its place with him!?"

The crowd all 'Wowed' at the trick while Rarity nearly fainted at the thought of both of them kissing in front of everypony especially Pinkie who is having a doozy from her so called 'Pinkie Sense'

(You know to be honest I was lazy on the these parts so just enjoy it okay?)

Pinkie Pie "Um Applejack?" she said stuttering with her shaking body

Applejack "What's gonna happen Pinkie?"

Pinkie Pie "I don't know!" she stuttered

Rarity who has lost all common sense melodramatically said, "Ohh~ I hope it's something romantic..."

Applejack felt quite worried when Pinkie said that, "Twillight!" she shouted

Twillight looked back to where her friends are seeing Applejack waving to her as well as Pinkie Pie who is having a doozy which alerted her "Something is going to happen?!" she nearly shouted disturbing ponies nearby her as well as Daisy who have enhanced senses

Immediately the stage is blasted with volleys of tiny sharp magic bolts but not enough to trigger the explosion, the impact is enough to cause a fog made up of tiny wood dust. The crowd witnessing it panicked and ran for their life while Twillight and her friends stayed behind looking around for the assaulter

Daisy managed to cast up a shield in time, "That was close.." "If Twillight didn't shouted, I probably would have died.. and so will he.." she looked at Winter who is having a slight shock although he looked fine

Winter said, "Who just attacked us?"

Daisy "I don't know.." she dispelled the shield spontaneously with an outward force to push away the fog that could kill her

(Incase you didn't know vampires is very allergic to wood. If a vampire were to be stabbed or been cut by those wood they would suffer alot of pain that even the super regenerative properties of the vampire is unable to heal the wounds quickly and effectively. And the fog is made up of wood dust so if she were to inhale any of those it would damage her internal organs and in other words it can cause nearly fatal injuries to vampires)

Rainbow Dash who was flying at lightning speed from Daisy carriage to the magic show showed up with horror on her face she said, "Twillight! You won't believe what we just found!"

Twillight "What? What did you just found then?"

Applejack rushes to Twillight side ignoring Pinkie Pie and Rarity who is still trying to shake away her fantasies of romance "Ya found something that could help us?"

Rainbow "Yeah! We found out that Daisy is a vampire!"

Twillight couldn't believe her ears while her friends including the couple on the stage are shocked to hear this

Twillight "That couldn't be true! Winter even slept in her home! She would have killed him by now!"

Rarity "I think there is a misunderstanding somewhere-" her sentence is interrupted

A mysterious pony showed up near the scene, its entire body is concealed by a black cape it is wearing, "Yes... she is a vampire.." she said in a female voice with a dark demeanor

All of the ponies looked at the mysterious pony

Rainbow "Who are you?! Another vampire?" she added, with an aggressive look on her face

"Who am I or what am I does not concern any of you.. What important is.. I am here to kill that same vampire you're all looking for.." she looked at Daisy with eyes full of murder

Daisy feels slightly threatened by the gaze she gave while Winter prepares a defensive spell incase if any unexpected attacks would happen like last time

Winter "You are insane!"

"Oh really? Then tell me how does her wound heal so fast? Hadn't you noticed that. Orphan"

Winter flinched slightly at those words she spoken out

Rarity retaliated, "Oh please you think we would just kill her without any evidence?! How barbaric!" she said with a slightly angry tone

Applejack "Darn right! Beside even if she is a vampire we might even help to turn her back to normal!"

Daisy eyes suddenly beamed with hope "Back to normal?"

Twillight "We won't hurt her! Not until we have enough evidence to convince us that she is!"

"I see.. Very well then if you don't want to cooperate then I guess I will have to kill you too.. But I will leave it to someone else.." she disappeared

"HAHAHAHAHA DIE YOU FOOLS!" A different female voice is heard

A large thunderbolt was blasted from the sky, it was heading straight for Daisy and it also triggered the gunpowder to explode. The explosion was so big that Twillight friends and herself is sent flying several feet away, Pinkie Pie and Rarity landed on a bush while the others got slammed into a tree or building giving some large bruises on their body especially Twillight who just managed to cast a bubble shield during her flight while the stage is almost completely obliterated and is covering in a big giant black smoke, after a few moments the smoke finally lift themselves away revealing Daisy and Winter protected by his bubble shield

Winter grunted he felt his entire body flooded with adrenaline then he suddenly puked out blood from his mouth and his horn slowly becomes swollen from stress and looks red- Very red then he collapse towards the ground looking unconscious with his body slightly covered in his own blood, Daisy seeing his little brother dying in front of her left her completely horrified

Daisy "Winter?.." she said with a tone of what sounded like a confused little filly seeing her dead mother lying on the ground "Are you alright?... Winter?..."

She waits for a reply... But is met with an eerie silence

"No.. No.. No! Don't leave me!"












"Do you promise me that the both of us will be together forever?"

"... Of course.. we will always be together.."

"Pinky promise?"

"... Pinky promise..."

Endless Love - Piano

End of A Sparkling Instinct - Finale

Author's Note:

Some of the paragraphs could be improved

If only I'm not that lazy and know how to show and tell more

I published this chapter in a rushed manner so expect some errors