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Vampire Love (OC) - StoryWriter



A vampire mare found true love

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Chapter One - A Sparkling Instinct Part Three

While in the street of Ponyville. Spike is outside of Twillight library with a big checklist

Spike "Right now lets take a look at my checklist that Twillight gave me" he unroll the very long scrolls, he look at his first task "Right Number One buy two ink pots, that seem easy enough" he walk toward the ink shop while dragging the scroll along with him. He walk into the ink and quill shop then a cha-ching sound is heard after that he come out with two ink pot grasped firmly by his claws, (Or hands) "Orrr.. Maybe not." when he realized that he doesn't have a cart, he scratches his head and look left and right, noticing a box on his right. The box is made of wood, he shrugs and roll his eyes then he put two of the ink pots on the box "Now I have to go back to the library and get my cart.. Oh well at least more work for me so that I won't get bored" He walks back to the library

Derpy Hooves flied by and noticed the box which she supposed to pick up but she didn't noticed the ink pots that she just hauled the box onto her back. When she take off the ink pots spills over her mane and coat making the box slippery on her back that it slipped. It lands on the ground wrecking the product inside it and alerted everyone including spike to look at the wreckage, "My bad!"

Spike "Oh great... Now I have to buy two more ink pots." as he walks toward the library

(Big plus for me trying to put Derpy Hooves into the scene? JackleApp Youtube Special for Derpy)

Spike enters the library, seeing Twillight making a big mess of the library by littering books everywhere on the floor, "Twillight? What are you looking for?"

Twillight "That is none of your business, Spike" as she checked the book piece by piece, dragging it out to look at the title

Somepony knocked the door with some chatting noises outside

Spike "Coming!" he walks toward the door then he opens it. Outside the door is Pinkie Pie,Applejack,Rarity,Rainbow Dash, and Fluttershy, "Oh its you guys.."

Rarity "Spike we are mares not stallions!" she nearly shouted

Spike "Sorry about that.. Come in and make yourself comfortable ladies.. yuck.." as he welcomes them into the library

Applejack "So uh.. what kind of problem are Twillight having actually?"

Pinkie Pie "Well she said she thinks Daisy is a Vampire.."

Fluttershy remembering the incident "..Oh really I never thought of that.. But-" her sentence is interrupted by Rainbow Dash

Rainbow Dash "Vampires? HA! Just wait and see. We will be kicking their butt in no time!" She bluffed "Wait did you said vampires?" with a hint of worries in her voice

Applejack "I wouldn't be so confident about it,"

Rarity "Oh please I won't believe something as horrible as that. And I don't believe in vampires either"

Pinkie Pie "I know right!? I mean Vampire doesn't exist at all and Daisy is just too nice to be actually a vampire!" She goes off screen then came back in a Sherlock Holmes costume, "And I wonder what makes Twillight think she's a vampire," she then smoke the bubble pipe

Rainbow Dash "And I wonder where you get all of those costume from"

Pinkie Pie "Well I stashed costume all around Ponyville. Incase of costume emergency!" She smiles brightly with a squee

Rainbow Dash "Rrrrriiiighhhhttttt..."

Twillight annoyed a little by her friends arrival, "Hey girls, What brings you here?" she said trying to mask her frustrations by trying to sound happy but her face soon turns serious as she goes back to do what she is doing

Applejack "Isn't it obvious?"

Rarity "We came here to help you of course"

Rainbow "So what this problem you are having anyway. Are we going to fight some monster? Cause I want to try out some of my new moves on them" as she fly around the library

Twillight let out a sigh before stopping what she's doing, "I think Daisy is a vampire"

Applejack "Why do you think she's a vampire then sugarcube?"

Twillight "Because when I asked Fluttershy what happened last night she saw two mysterious ponies and the only one she managed to get a good look at is a mare. She has white coat, blue mane except she has red eyes and bat wings" all of her friends looks at Fluttershy with curiosity in their eyes

Applejack "Is it true? Fluttershy?"

Fluttershy hesitantly said, "Well um.. yes.. But I don't think she-" Her sentence is interrupted again

Rainbow Dash "Right so Daisy is a vampire! Let's go kick her butt!" she tries to fly out of the window

Applejack "Hold on a second Rainbow!-" She bites Rainbow Dash tail before she manages to fly outside annoyed her a little after that she spits her tail out "-I don't think Daisy is a vampire, she is nice and she is also in love with that young stallion..." she blushed a little when saying it, "Sorta.."

Before Rainbow can speak Rarity added "And when I met Daisy she introduced herself nicely to me and she also been nice to the children too I don't really think she is a vampire if you ask me" all of her friends look at Rainbow Dash especially Applejack who is giving her the meanest face

Rainbow said, "Well since you put it that way.. Maybe we should check her out a bit more?"

Twillight "She could just be a wolf in sheep's clothing!"

Applejack "Well.. I don't read much about vampires but aren't they suppose to burn in the sun?"

Twillight "Well- I don't know I haven't gathered enough facts yet. And I can't even find that book I just read!" she shouted

Pinkie Pie "Is this the book you just read?" She bite the book firmly in her mouth then fling it to Twillight

"Really Pinkie how did you do that?" Applejack asked

Pinkie Pie "I don't even know!" She squeed

The book is titled Vampireology

Twillight quickly levitate and open the book reading it pages by pages

Rainbow Dash "So got any plans yet?"

Fluttershy "I don't really think we should do something terrible to her, And I don't think she really is evil she was actually nice... I met her on the street alone and she didn't do anything terrible to me.."

Rarity "Really? Twillight I think there is a misunderstanding you should know here"

Applejack "Yeah.. We don't even know what her intention are.."

Pinkie Pie suddenly suggest, "I think her intention is getting married!" - she bounce into the air happily while saying this - "And then they go to the bedroom then they-" Rarity felt what's coming out of her mouth that she is interrupted by Rarity

Rarity "Pinkie!" all of them blushed slightly except Rarity and Applejack

Pinkie Pie "Oh... Sorry?"

Twillight "Well.. Since you mentioned that reasonable excuse.. I think we should keep an eye on them for now"

Fluttershy "Oh that's wonderful. I hope the two of them get married.."

Rainbow Dash "JUST GREAT now my cheek looks red, And I don't like it!"

Applejack "You mean your blush?"

Rainbow Dash "Yeah.. I don't want to lose my awesomeness in front of Ponyville with a red face"

Applejack "And I'm surprised to see you actually care for love"

Rainbow Dash "I do not! Pinkie Pie just got me acting all sappy.. That's all!"

Pinkie Pie "Awww.. That just so cute of you!"

Rainbow Dash look away in embarrassment on showing her soft personality

Rarity "I do hope the stallion that Daisy with is a gentlecolt"

Pinkie Pie "When they have foals I might introduce them to my friends!"

Twillight "Friends? What friends?"

Pinkie Pie "Pound Cake and Pumpkin Cake. Then WE WILL HAVE TWICE THE FUN!"

Twillight "Right.... Let just hope Pinkie Pie is right about it. But I want all of you to keep an eye on her okay? I still don't trust her"

All her friends nodded except Rarity who is disappointed to see that Twillight is still not letting them building their relationship peacefully, "But Twillight!" she said as she step forward

Applejack silenced Rarity by blocking her path, "Let just trust her for now Rarity. Remember the time where she told us that Cadance is a changeling then at the last moment we found out she really is a changeling?"

Rarity "I suppose you are.. Right.." she reluctantly said

Spike who had been standing there the whole time looking bemused, "Well.. You girls go ahead and keep an eye on her then. I will be cleaning this mess that Twillight made"

Twillight chuckled, "Don't worry Spike I will clean them up myself and I really think you should go carry out your task now Spike"

Spike saluted to her and went back outside with his cart


In the street of Ponyville

Winter and Daisy was walking down the street, there are some food stalls among the edge of the street far apart from each other and this time the area aren't too crowded today thanks to the event that Daisy hosted

Winter "Hey Daisy how about we buy some food, it's not a date without food right?" he spoke to Daisy but she didn't reply. He speak to her again, "Daisy?"

Daisy "You go ahead and buy some.. I'm just not feeling well right now.." as her eyes looks less shiny

Winter "She sure get more and more depressed when she's around me." As he walk toward a stall that sell lots of colourful Daisies

Roseluck the shopkeeper "Hi there. How can I help you?"

Winter "Well just want to buy several daisies"

Roseluck "Why are you buying so many?" she asked

Winter slightly shocked at the question, "Well, I.. am.. Dating?" he says it with slight difficulty

Roseluck "With that mare over there? She looks very beautiful"

Winter look away in embarrassment, "I really wished I had planned the date a bit further before asked her out!"

Roseluck slightly charmed by the way he acts, "You're very cute when you're embarrassed"

Winter "Could I make a purchase right now?" he said rashly with an unsteady tone in his voice

Roseluck "Yes that would be 4 bits for a bouquet of daisies"

Winter quickly give her 4 bits and grabbed the bouquet uncounsiously, "Thank you!" He quickly trots away

Roseluck giggled as she tricked him into buying a bouquet for his marefriend

Winter "Wait why did I brought a bouquet!?" as he realized what he brought, as soon as Daisy looked at him his entire body tense up a little making his movement slightly unsteady but unnoticeable "Just go ahead and make a first good impression" his conscience said. As he trotted nearer to her Winter stopped and said, "Well, Uh.. Since you look quite unwell.." -he levitate the flower near her- "Will these flowers cheer you up?"

Daisy smiled, "That's very sweet of you.." she gently take over the flower, then she take a deep breath, smelling the flowers aromas "I like it.." as she starting to feel better

Winter "I'm glad you like it" his conscience "That wasn't very hard was it?" both of them begin to resume their journey

Daisy stop levitating the bouquet when she hug them with one hoof pressed against her chest while trotting with three hoofs "Does he really like me?"

(You know flowers represent meanings too What Flowers mean)

Meanwhile Fluttershy and Rarity who was trotting away from the library saw both of them, however as Rarity inspect the couple more closely she begins to think that both of them are dating which excite her

Rarity abruptly blurted out, "Fluttershy! Do you know what I am thinking right now?"

Fluttershy surprised by Rarity sudden suggestion, "Um... try to help them?" she said uncertainly

Rarity "No my dear! We should invite them to a private tea party just for the two of them" she said with confidence in her voice

Fluttershy "Oh.. Um how are we going to ask them?"

Rarity "It simple darling, Just trot straight toward them, introduce yourself then ask them 'Would you two mind if I invite you to a private tea party just for the two of you?' like that"

Fluttershy "Um... I don't really think we should do... that.."

Rarity "Please!"

Fluttershy "Well I..."

Rarity "Please! Please do it for me!" she almost begged with puppy eyes

Fluttershy sighed, "If it is so important for you then.. I will try..."

Rarity "Oh thank you so much Fluttershy! I just can't wait to see them kiss each other!"

Fluttershy blushed, afterward Rarity just realized what just came out of her mouth, she let out a slightly nervous chuckle at Fluttershy blushing face

There was a moment of silence before Fluttershy shyly take off. Her face is still slightly red

Rarity "Was that a bit too much?" she asked herself

When Fluttershy is flying in the air she thought about the strange events that happened today. The thought of their carriage arrived into the town made her felt a little curious "What could be inside that carriage?" she wondered as she dismiss her other thoughts. After a few moments of flying Fluttershy saw Daisy and Winter in a distance. She hesitated slightly before landing near the couple.

Fluttershy "Um.. Hi Daisy"

The couples stopped in their track when they have been greeted by a pony in yellow with pink mane

Daisy "Hi Fluttershy sure is unexpected to see you here.."

Winter "You two knew each other?"

Daisy "Well kind of.. But we are just acquaintance"

Fluttershy "Hi.. My name is Fluttershy.."

Winter "My name is Winter nice to meet you"

Fluttershy "Nice to meet you.. Winter" she look away from them for a moment before she boldly asked them, "Um.. Do you mind if I invite you two to a private tea party just for the two of you.. Um.. If you don't mind that is.."

Winter was speechless, "A tea party just for the two of us??"

Daisy had a mixed feeling of wonder and excitement "A tea party just for me and my little brother..?" her eyes gaze at Winter eyes timidly. As Winter eyes gaze her back it melts his heart at the sight of her mellow eyes

Winter "What am I worrying about.." "Well.. I.. Accept your invitation Fluttershy.."

Fluttershy "Oh really? That's wonderful.." she felt glad she is able to help Rarity, "Oh and um.. please follow me" she begin to lead the way to her house as they follow her, her brain switched her movements from manual to autopilot as her eyes see the familiar road and surroundings knowing which way is back home. As her movement is on autopilot her thoughts wonder far and wide pondering on the strange events that happened yesterday

Daisy "So uh Winter.." she said

Winter "What is it?" his voice sounding nervous

Daisy "I... Really liked you, ever since we met.."

Winter is slightly delighted and shocked at the same time that he uncontrollably smiled. His smile also delighted her a little, "I.. Also really like you when I first saw you too.."

Daisy "Hmm guess we are like a couple destined to marry each other then?" She giggled as her playfulness is returning

Winter "Well uh.. Do you really think so?" sounding a little shy

Daisy "Most probably.." she trots a bit closer just enough to hear his racing heartbeat

Winter "So uh-" he quickly try to change the topic, "What are we going to do when both of us is alone?" "Oh Celestia why did I said that!"

Daisy quietly thinks about his question. Her face turns slightly red just thinking about it

Winter blushed, "Ju-Just forget what I said!" his voice is loud enough to startle Fluttershy off her train of thoughts

Fluttershy look back to them "What just happened?" she saw both of their faces red, "Oh nothing great!" she rashly said those words and immediately look forward before she blushes not wanting to think what just happened between the two of them

Winter cleared his throat, "So uh.. Fluttershy when will we arrive?"

Fluttershy "Oh.. We are almost there"

As they trot out of Ponyville the three of them able to see a cottage near the everfree forest

Fluttershy "Um.. Just keep on trotting... I will be there.. waiting for you at my cottage.." she then gently fly away toward her cottage

Daisy looks slightly excited, "I wonder what kind of tea she is preparing for us"

Winter "I hope it isn't something expensive.."

Daisy "What afraid of jasmine tea now?" she playfully said

Winter "Um.. No!" he blushed slightly

(Jasmine Tea Benefits)

Daisy "Honestly Winter you should loosen up a bit~" "Why am I flirting with him alot?" his own conscience asked

(She feel a lot of love for him which is why she flirts with him a lot I still got more to explain but lets not)

Winter "Well no.. But I will try.. I'm just not used to these kind of.. dates I never had a marefriend in my entire life- until now.. that is.."

Daisy "Look Winter having a date with a mare suppose to be fun and you shouldn't worry too much if your marefriend is enjoying it and I mean look at me am I looking disappointed to you?"

Winter "No.."

Daisy quiet down for a few moment then suddenly, "But I do have a sexy flank right?" When Winter heard her saying sexy flank he almost took a glance at her flank that she giggled

Winter "I well.. uhhh.. Let just go ahead and enjoy our date!" he then rushed off toward the cottage

Daisy "I can't believe that till today you still making me going crazy" she said it sentimentally

Winter arrives infront of the cottage first, seeing Fluttershy standing near the door waiting for them

Fluttershy noticed Winter, "Hi Winter.. Where is Daisy?.."

Winter "Well.. She is behind me." he said slowly, "Where is the tea party?"

Fluttershy "Well... Its behind my cottage.." she hides some of her face behind her long pink mane

Winter "And can you lead the way?"

Fluttershy "Why yes of course.. Please follow me.."

Both of them entered the cottage, there's a lot of little critters and birds chittering and chirping about, some critters that were playing tag even playfully run through their hoofs, it startled Winter a little that he lifted one of his hoof as they run through

Winter "Are these your pets?"

Fluttershy "Oh no! They are my friends. My pet is actually a bunny I call him Angel.."

Winter "And why are you living near the Everfree forest?" as he look outside the window seeing the Everfree forest

Fluttershy "I live near the Everfree forest to take care of all the animals..."

Winter "Even the dangerous ones?" he asked slightly curious

Fluttershy "Well.. Yes.."

Winter "You're not afraid that they will hurt you?"

Fluttershy "No.. And um.. Here we are.." both of them arrived at the backdoor of the cottage leading to the backyard. Fluttershy opens the door for him

Winter "Thank you Fluttershy" He walks through the door

Fluttershy "You're welcome.." then she heard some knockings on the front door and hearing Daisy saying "Hello?" Fluttershy then trots back to the front door, "Just a moment!"

When Fluttershy greets her Daisy said, "You really like animals huh?" as she look around her home seeing animals almost everywhere

Fluttershy "Oh yes I really like animals and.. Please follow me.. Um.. He is waiting for you.."

Daisy "Of course don't want to keep him waiting, and thank you Fluttershy for giving us privacy"

Fluttershy felt slightly guilty when she thanked her but nevertheless she lead her to where Winter is. Winter is sitting by the table. On the table there are one teapot, three teacups and some desserts to eat on he also looking slightly bemused about the tea she had made

(Kinda hard to explain the surroundings but if you just watched Season 1 Episode 17 Stare Master or if its still fresh in your mind then you probably able to imagine the surrounding quite well)

Daisy is slightly shocked to see that the tea is a Damiana tea, "Where did you get this tea from?"

Fluttershy "Well.. Um.. It's from a friend of mine Iron Will.. He is a minotaur"

Daisy "Why did he give you this tea?"

Fluttershy "As a repayment for unsatisfying service.."

Daisy "Do you know what does it do to you?" she asked curious of her knowledge about the benefits of the Damiana Tea

Fluttershy "Um.. I don't know.. Iron Will said 'Its for your health, to help you keep a healthy mind and body' that's what he said to me.."

(Damiana Tea Benefits)

Winter took a sip from the tea, soon he beginning to look very calm and relaxed, Daisy joins the table with a cheerful smile on her face, when Winter look at her he can't help but also smile a bit cheerfully like she do.

Fluttershy "Well.. Um enjoy your date... I will be leaving now.." as she closes the door, soon she trot toward her living room seeing her animal friends a bit confused and anxious about the two guests, "Don't worry they are friendly they just came here to have some time alone together... So please.. Don't bother them okay?" all the animals nodded in acknowledgement, she trot out of the living room going outside her cottage. Feeling slightly happy for them "Such a lovely couple" she soon unfolds her wings and take flight flying toward Ponyville. While flying toward Ponyville she noticed Rarity waving to her near the road that connects her cottage to Ponyville, she lands near her

Rarity "So. How was it. Going?" she said hardly able to contain her excitement

Fluttershy "It went.. Rather.. Well.."

Rarity "Great! Did you see them kissed each other?"

Fluttershy "Um.. No.." she hide behind her mane feeling slightly lovesick, "But I think.. they might be kissing each other right now.."

Rarity "Oww.. Such a shame that I won't be able to see them kissing" she said in slight disappointment, "But still! That's how life works am I right?"

Fluttershy felt confused about what she is implying to her, "Well.. I think so.." she said unsurely

Rarity "Come along Fluttershy let's report our findings to Twillight Sparkle. I hope our evidence is enough to convince her that she is not a vampire"

Fluttershy "Um.. I was thinking.."

Rarity "Hmm?.. What's wrong darling?"

Fluttershy "Um.. Nothing is wrong.. I just want to Go inside her carriage and see what's in it myself?"

Rarity "Why you want to go in there alone then my dear?" she asked, feeling slightly bemused

Fluttershy "I don't know... I just felt like I should be alone.." "This feeling is so.. weird.. Why do I want to be alone..?"

Rarity thought about it for a few moment, "Alright.. But first tell me how did they spend their time together"

Fluttershy "Oh.. Well first I met them near the shopping district.. They were dating together and when I tried to invite them to a private tea party they were a bit surprised" she continued talking about her time she had with them


While near the schoolhouse

Jim Beam the Workers Boss "Well that is a job well done If I say so myself!" as several of the workers admired at the stage as well as wiping their sweat out of their foreheads

In the backstage everything is dark inside

"Hehehe blow it up when the show starts eh? Hehehehe" as the psychotic mare carefully arranges her gunpowder barrels, when she finished arranging she casts an invisibility spell making the barrels to become invisible and she also casted a magic spell detection spell which will set the gunpowders to blow up incase the spell detect any magics, The mare snickered maniacally "This is going to be so beautiful!" she snickered again, Then she disappeared

Author's Note:

Hopefully I had improved especially the show and tell which I am still weak at