9140373
so, what was your favorite part? also, how do you think i should have cyre explore sunny town before he discovers the truth, and when the blanks go... well, you know...

9140399
Well, I mean how he arrives in sunny town, meets everypony, and then discovering Mitta and discovering ruby's cause of death

9140459
Yeah, i can see that happening . also, i updated Cyre's power scale to include ultra instinct, and super saiyan white.

Super Saiyan white:
4,265,690,625,000,000,000
Ultra instinct sign:
106,642,265,625,000,000,000
Ultra instinct (complete):
213,284,531,250,000,000,000

9140487
only problem i see is how Cyre would even attain ultra instinct, as its pretty hard to attain. have any suggestions for making that happen?

9140490
Simple have him pushed to a state of near defeat.

This was was a awesome sweet chapter. Can you have him turn some Villon's aka Chrysalis.

"Welcome to the Crystal Empire, Thorax. I'm sorry we didn't take the time to get to know you, even when Cyre presented you to us. Maybe we can change that now?" Shining Armor asked. Cyre was just glad this whole ordeal passed over. Cyre wondered what would come next, zombie ponies in a forgotten town? highly unlikely, Cyre had thought. I mean, what are the chances of that, huh?

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