A mysterious magic is turning humans into ponies and other species. With her and most of her friends already in stages of the transformation, Sunset has to figure out what's going on before its too late.
"Dear Princess Twilight, I know its been awhile since I wrote to you but we've got something of a problem over here. It might be nothing, but Twilight in this world has been picking up strange readings that seems to be coming from Equestrian magic. I know you don't really know much about what's going on, but if you can give us any advice that would be great, I'll let you know if we learn anything new."
"Do you know what kind of magic you're dealing with yet?"
"I think we're looking at some sort of advanced transformation magic. It turned Rarity and Applejack into some sort of, mix of humans and ponies and no one seems to find it strange but me. I don't know what's going on here, do you have any suggestions?"
"Sorry Sunset, I've read stories about that powerful of Transformation magic but it requires some sort of magical item to concentrate it. I'm going to have to look into some things before I can give you a definitive answer. But what I can tell you is that its dangerous, I can't even promise you that it'll be possible to reverse the transformations. If someone is turning people into ponies, then you're going to have to be very careful."
"Thank you anyway, let me know if you find anything. Do you know why the mental changes don't seem to affect me?" Twilight answered quickly:
"It might be because you're from Equestria, if you were born a pony then there's no reason why the mental changes would affect you maybe. There's also a chance that it might not just apply to you, but I can't make any promises. For now, just be careful and keep an eye out for whoever might be causing these changes."
You should consider italicizing those, to make it less confusing..
The retroactive shenanigans would have to do a crapload of work here. I think the best evidence would be "the oldest pony families in Canterlot" likely, at this point, being the ONLY ones.
perhaps have that in italics.
You should consider italicizing those, to make it less confusing..
8988571 I meant to put those in quotes, whoops.
The retroactive shenanigans would have to do a crapload of work here. I think the best evidence would be "the oldest pony families in Canterlot" likely, at this point, being the ONLY ones.