I seem to notice that this chapter is rushed. Were you in a hurry? And it also seems to be a little worse quality than the previous chapters. You know what? Do you need a proofreader? I can be one if you need. I could check the grammar before you publish chapters.
And a small note: your: Belonging to you; of you; related to you (singular; one owner).
You're=You are
But don't let these small mistakes get in your way. Keep writing, 'kay?
Edit: If Jesus turned 360 decrees he would've just spun around. If he was looking behind him, use 180.
Exellenct new chapter, I hate cliffhangers but I'll let this one slip just because i cant wait for the new chapter.
1520902 Hehehe, This is my worst cliffhanger yet
1520911 Its not worse than Krinkles cliffhangers though. I cant wait to find out what happens to Sandford and Hank in MC 11.
OH DEAR GOD FINALLY! A NEW CHAPTER! YES!!!!!!
And if you hate cliffhangers, read this.
cliffhanger ....FFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
Oh no Jesus what have you done to mooney
You put bee instead of be
1526703 Fixed, thanks :)
1526713 No problem
Hmm... Madness Combat meets MLP.
First reaction:
Reaction after reading story:
Keep up the good work sir!
1541490 Thanks! :D
Glad you like it
Oh, a chapter!
I seem to notice that this chapter is rushed. Were you in a hurry? And it also seems to be a little worse quality than the previous chapters. You know what? Do you need a proofreader? I can be one if you need. I could check the grammar before you publish chapters.
And a small note:
your:
Belonging to you; of you; related to you (singular; one owner).
You're=You are
But don't let these small mistakes get in your way. Keep writing, 'kay?
Edit: If Jesus turned 360 decrees he would've just spun around. If he was looking behind him, use 180.
1550528 Actually yeah.. I'd like that :)
And you were right, this one was pretty rushed :|
At first I was like
terrible grammar!
But then I was all
fuck it, this is great shit!
1596263 Phew :D
Glad you like it ^_^
1594310 Alrighty then. PM me if you want me to discuss about proofreading.
1597009 Kay :)
I just hope I remember
Where's the rest of the Mane Six?
1804486 Haven't appeared yet :P