Phobos is the Clown? An interesting plot twist, good sir, but it might not be canon to the original Madness-series. Meh, i don't care. The main thing is that you updated! But of course, grammar errors... Grammar errors everywhere... Oh, and try to reduce the amount of your own comments and transitions in the story. You can detail the events that happen on transitions. This takes time, of course, but it fills the story and makes the text less bland. But nevertheless, this is overall a good chapter.
1394497 Oh, sorry What I was trying to say was: If you see a grammar mistake, it doesn't make you stop reading and analyze the mistake. Does it? (Wow yeah my other thing was cryptic XD)
1394504 No need to apologize there. And to answer your question: Sometimes, yes. I try to understand the mistake and perhaps correct it in my mind. It doesn't hinder my reading speed or change my opinion about this story. Everyone makes mistakes.
1411663 Yeah... Well I'm just glad I have meat shield's such as: Rigby, Ponyboy and all the other guy's you can hire And congratulations on creating page two on this :D
JOLLY GOOD SHOW
1390322 Thanks Guvna :D
Phobos is the Clown? An interesting plot twist, good sir, but it might not be canon to the original Madness-series. Meh, i don't care. The main thing is that you updated! But of course, grammar errors... Grammar errors everywhere... Oh, and try to reduce the amount of your own comments and transitions in the story. You can detail the events that happen on transitions. This takes time, of course, but it fills the story and makes the text less bland. But nevertheless, this is overall a good chapter.
Moar pwese?
If not then I will go all vampire on yo ass.
1391099 Thanks Alan Wake
My gramar level is atleast... It wont make you stop and look at a mistake 'bad'... is it?
1391589 I fear no Vampire
1393253 YoU ShOuLd AnD WiLl
1394266 NEIN
Phobos? PHOBOS?! That son of a is really hard to kill
1394271 Who would have known that Hank was german... MEDIC! I HAVE A NEW FRIEND FOR YOU!
1394274 HEEEY buddy long time no see :D
and yeah, He's a bitch to kill
1394280 In what?
1394443 Project nexus?... If not, just haven't seen any activity from you recently
1394477 Ah yes Project Nexus... Bastard is hard to kill
1393253 Alan Wake? That's a new one
And I didn't understand a thing you just wrote there...
1394497 Oh, sorry
What I was trying to say was: If you see a grammar mistake, it doesn't make you stop reading and analyze the mistake. Does it?
(Wow yeah my other thing was cryptic XD)
1394504 No need to apologize there.
And to answer your question: Sometimes, yes. I try to understand the mistake and perhaps correct it in my mind. It doesn't hinder my reading speed or change my opinion about this story. Everyone makes mistakes.
1394518 Phew, that's good to know :D
Jeez that's a lot of comment's that I have posted in this fic. Must be my chatty nature
*Random guy asks if I like ponies and Madness Combat. My response*
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1398949 Link's broken
What is it?
1399387 A pony version of Hank, shrugging.
1399490 Ah
1399652 And now its time for me to play some Madness Nexus. Because, guns, and blood, and badassery (is that even a real word?).
1400031 It is if you want it to be :D
1401789 Quick question: Do you play Madness Project Nexus. If so, wich level are you att?
1404563 well to answer your question. I use chrome
So it's pretty much impossible on my laptop
But last time I checked, I was at wave 60 >:D
1404678 Oh... FFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1404686 How rude and unnecessary
1404694 Nope.avi!
Rude, yes, but it was completely necessary! trust me!
1404718 Oh, ok
1404786 Exellent.
1404678 Wave 60?! Man, I've only reached wave 53. Salute to you.
1411663 Yeah... Well I'm just glad I have meat shield's such as: Rigby, Ponyboy and all the other guy's you can hire
And congratulations on creating page two on this :D
1411671
Phobos=Tricky?
PLOT TWIST!
1404686
i think he step on lego 9 years ago