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I remember reading the first few chapters of this months ago and being completely enthralled with the story you was leading me though. Now coming back to it and with more chapters to lead me further into the story, it's safe to say that this chapter culminates to my every personal expectation of a great dark and mysterious story.
Chapter after chapter, information to solve the mystery and further the story has been like a steady slow drip. No detail is obscured, each scene I can visualize clearly and feel emotionally. Nothing about this story is senseless filler that throws off the darkness that surrounds each character and moment.
Stories like these are what keep me lurking around this site, and I must thank you for provide such fine work for me to read.
Pinkie Pie would certainly think something was off there.
D-D-D-Dusk Shine?!?!?!
We smiled at her. “It’s nice to meet you, Dusk Shine. My name’s Mossy Bridge, but most ponies call me Moss.” We tapped our nametag.
That's what I'm wondering as well.
Blue Moon....
Looks like she is the kind of pony who'd be a good listener.
In a place like that, I can totally understand.
A big one!
Shopping center....
Yeah, kind of.
Oh dear....
I'd like to thing this is a dream...a very informative one!
You really do need evidence.
Just keep an eye on her...something's bound to give.
Even the faintest hint of body language can give something out.
The smell...nice.
Twilight?!?!
You most certainly do.
Wait...what?! Wait, you can't mean that-?!
I thought she didn't like being called that.
No there's really not.
Not really following them either.
Strange....
Maybe so.
Space for 'in between'.
Anything that can work, obviously.
Indeed.
Cause that's for somepony to talk to another.
Uh-oh....
Oh shit, Rarity's coming back to reality!!!
The ponies distancing themselves from Rarity is only confirming thesis a dream!!!
I see what you did there at the end!!!
Oh Rarity....
Oh Rarity, she's going mad!!!
And now she's back...right into the shitstorm!!!
As soon as I read this my brain was switched into WHOMST mode because I just gotta know all of what these lovely little names mean. I can't believe that a) only book one of this series is published and b) I'm nearly done with it.