The Many Sides of Twilight Sparkle

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shallow15

shallow15 #1 · Apr 28th, 2018 · 2 · ·

One thing: If you're going to have characters react in awe to something they're looking at, describe it to the audience.

Otherwise, this was very cute.

CapNTilfy

CapNTilfy #2 · Apr 28th, 2018 · · ·

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Thanks. I'll keep that advice in mind for future chapters/stories. =)

Edit: I'll edit it tomorrow. It's pretty late right now.

OmniFox

OmniFox #3 · Apr 28th, 2018 · · ·

Why don't you ask Midnight Succubus?

HeartfireFirebrand

HeartfireFirebrand #4 · May 24th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Twilight smiled and rolled her eyes. "Why don't you give her both Sunset's and my phone numbers? We'd be more than happy to help her with what she's going through. Both Sunset and I have been there."
Timber stared at Twilight. "Wait...you have?"
Twilight blushed. "Yeah...It's a long story. You see...

That must have been a surprise

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