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Time for things to go downhill, uphill, lefthill, righthill and all the hills between
This chapter felt kinda slow, it was funny though.
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Yeah, needed it I felt for the set up. It was also how thebstory wanted to told. This is another one where I am not sure if I am telling the story or if I am somehow listening to some overarching narrative within reality that is whispering this directly to my subconcious.
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Two things to mention about this:
1.It should be "Yeah, needed it I felt for the setup. It was also how the story wanted to tell. This is another one where I am not sure if I am telling the story or if I am somehow listening to some overarching narrative within a reality that is whispering this directly to my subconscious."
2. Blame the plot bunnies.
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1. Dude, I do most of my comment replies on my phone, I have really big fingers, makes being grammatical difficult.
2. However I am glad to see that you have devoloped some truly wonderful critiqing skills, bravo!
3. Not so much Plot bunnies as I no longer have any idea about where this story is going to go. My narrative, that is the one that I had originally planned, has gone out the window and even I have no clue what is about to happen. I love it. This is shaping up to purely be one I do for fun. One that it decides where it wants to go, what its ultimate destiny is. The only thing I know for certain is that I should really change this from teen to mature because I had a dream of Ach’ro’da doing wonderfully beautiful things to pinkie involving the illitihids mouth tentacles applied to the party planners plump plot lips. And the entirety of this fic has come from my dreams. So we are all going to be slideing down the rabbit hole. And other holes besides. But don’t worry, the only non consent will be between dash and sparkle. Although, only because Dash will not get a chance to recover from Twilight’s subconcious affections long enough to give consent, even thought the rainbow maned speedster would really have no objections. And Ach’ro’oa will find a special somepony, just it will not be pinkie. It will be an OC, the rough picture is in my head, he almost speaks to me, but only almost, unless of course someone suggests a better idea. (Not Pinkie)
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I too do a lot of my writing on the phone and I'm don't have small hands either, sorry if it sounded like I was nitpicking but I tend to be critical of my own grammar to help me write better. Besides, I too write my stories —all four of them— just for fun and as I go along for the ride, it's just that I have the habit of writing whatever idea I have on reminders on my phone and later see what I can add or not, the wonders of Google Drive on both my phone and computer. Out of curiosity, is English your first/main language? Even if isn't I can recommend a wonderful app and program to help correct little mistakes that are overlooked, its called Grammarly —don't worry its free— and it saved me a lot of trouble when I type on my phone and on my computer since English isn't my first/main language.
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The sad thing is that English is indeed my primary Language. I have been considering gramerly for a while. However where we differ in our techniques is that I type all of my stories directly to the website. I do have Google Drive, but it just became easier to use this platform for posting. As well as Fanfiction.net for my stories there, as opposed to having to transfer stories between at least two, possibly three, websites. Which unfortunately, means that I am at risk for losing a considerable amount of progress if, say for some ridiculous reason, this or another website objects to having more then one window open of the same story at the same time. Which, honestly, the great thing about google docs is that it saves everything across the board, You have a little extra work in the transfer, but I tend to risk losing a lot more by doing things my way. For me it is worth it as I don't have a lot of time, sometimes in my day, minutes can matter during the week. For most individuals, the extra security and use is worth it. But thanks for the input, I do appreciate it.
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I too type directly on the website, Grammarly works directly on the browser as an extension of Google Chrome and has an auto-correction feature in the text boxes, I myself use it to write both the comments and the stories of the site. You can download it from the Chrome Web Store.
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It also works on Fanfiction if you are wondering. Unfortunately, it conflicts with the auto-correction of Google Docs so it won't work there.
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