A World in it's throes of death, the final survivor of a war against Evil. A magical realm where the powers of love and friendship almost without equal. A Hidden threat unknown to both. Can the survivors of this dying world prevail and save Equestria
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Damn, i was just going to check on this story and it has almost increased with 50,000 words.
ESL huh? Nice tag salad, by the way. Really inviting, that.
And that's where I'm off.
Sorry, I just hate this stuff with the nobles and Blueblood. Your author's notes state it'll only get more so, so I have nothing to look forward to since I have no interest in the human OC easily humiliating pushover nobleponies with his awesome human coolness.
Sorry about the snide tone there. It's just so frustrating. I want to like this story, but that aspect kills it for me. If it turns out later the nobles are actually okay and Blueblood isn't all horrible and David doesn't just waltz all over them... but that's probably not going to happen.
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First I don't mind the Snide remark, it was made respectful.
Second Every story is not for everyone. And I can understand. Just keep in mind David may have had an emotional re-balancing, he's been through hell, he doesn't give a S**T about politics. When Luna goes into David's dreams... Let's just say I'm not holding back the details of what he been through.
I see Celestia as the loving mother who's willing to spoil her children (Ponies) to a point such as slaking off on their chores (Duties) As long as they are done in a decent time and honest effort is put into it.
Luna is the more strict parent. She expects you to do your chores and put great effort into it. IE if you are a noble your duty is to the land and your fellow ponies.
And assuming that nobles have say 300 years consecutive service. After Luna's Banishment and Celestia needing to assume the duties of both. Combined with the fact that she and her sister were driven apart by Discord (Who is more malicious in my stories). She was put into a depression, and while the ponies at the time of Moon's banishment, where very sympathetic to her pain and plight. and assuming that nobles have say 300 years conservative service. Some of the nobles are four generations removed from Luna's expectations. and are used to doing their duties and being free to do what they want.
Luna and Celestia are night and Day, yin and yang. They balance each other. They were never meant to be separated. And because of it, Equestria has been on the decline.
As for Blue Blood. His issues are medical, when combined with someone like Celestia who would coddle him, he grew up a Spoiled Brat. He'll improve under Luna's tutelage which won't be as harsh or cruel as one thinks. And the issues at the Grand Galloping Gala,
As for Luna's attitude. Yes she is guilty of her pride and such. But a noble even a princess who has done such horrible things, who feels terrible guilt has to project some level of strength. Luna if asked if she ever feels guilt over what happened? She could recite to you the name, colors, description of their cutie mark of every pony that died when she first became Nightmare Moon, She could recite to you the name, colors, description of their cutie mark of every pony that died when she returned after a thousand years. And she will NEVER forget.
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Thank you for the gracious way you took my comment. That's very kind of you.
I'm worried though that David's horrible experiences will be used to, well, excuse his behaviour. Yes, he deserves a massive break, but encouraging him to be an *sshole can be problematic. And that the nobles will just be his personal punching bag to vent his anger with the princess' endorsement.