Chapter II: A new world
Canterlot High School
Gymnasium
"Ugh, It's soooooo boring!" The rainbow haired girl exclaimed.
"Come on, it's not that bad," The orange and red haired girl comforted. "It's not going to last til tomorrow,"
"Yeah! It's still going to be a GREAT slumber party!" Exclaimed the pink haired girl.
"Let's just try to enjoy ourselves, shall we darlings?" The purple haired girl asked.
*CRASH*
"What was that?" The orange and red haired girl asked.
"I don't know, but we should check what it was," The dark blue haired girl said as she started to move towards the door.
The others quickly followed.
Outside Canterlot High
The girls exited the school to see what made the crash not but moments ago. They started looking around and then they saw something, no, someone on the ground in front of the school statue. They started to approach the figure laying on the ground.
"What in tarnation? He wasn't here before, was he?" The blond girl asked.
"I'm sure that we would have noticed him just lying here! Where did he even come from?" The rainbow haired girl asked.
Before anyone could answer they heard a groans and a grunt of pain coming from him.
"He sound like he is in pain," The shy girl ascertained.
"We should get him to the nurses office. Who knows how badly he is hurt," The orange haired girl said as they all agreed. They then picked him up and started to head to the nurses office. They knew that someone was there.
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It felt like hours before I started to wake up. I felt pain all over my body as I tried to open my eyes. I saw that I was in a room of sorts. I only saw the ceiling so I didn't have much to go of on. I then heard voices coming from outside the room.
"I wonder if he is alright?"
"He is fine, for the most part. It would seem that he had some cuts and bruises of sorts,"
"What!? Where could he have gotten them from? We didn't hear anything aside form his fall,"
Are they talking about me?
"We should at least check if he is awake. We could find answers that way,"
They are definitely talking about you. The doors to the room open and I see eight girls walk in. They all looked different, in the way that their skin is actually different colours. 'What the actual fuck? How is that possible? It should not be possible! Oh, wait... I'm in a different world... Of course it's possible.' I thought. The girls see that I was indeed awake. They then gathered around my bed.
"Hey. Are you okay?" The orange and red haired girl asked.
"Just peachy," I said sarcastically. "Who are you and where am I?"
"Well, my name is Sunset Shimmer, and you are at Canterlot High School," She answered.
'So I really am in a different world, but I hope I don't have to tell them all about my origins... all though I don't think I can keep it a secret all to long,' I pondered. The girls saw that I was silent for a while.
"Are you ok?" Sunset asked.
"Yeah, I'm fine. Just lost in thought. Anyway, who are the others?" I asked in honest curiosity.
"Well, these are my friends, Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy," She answered.
"Hello!" They said in sync.
"So, Who are YOU and what are you doing here?" Dash asked me while getting close to my face.
"Well, for starters I'd like you to get back," I told Rainbow who, thankfully, backed away. "As for me, my name is Xuku and I would rather you not know where I come from," I answered.
"Why not?" Twilight asked me.
"Let's just say it's for your protection," I answered while closing my eyes. "For now I'd like to get some sleep, it has been a long day for me,"
The girls look at each other and then Sunset answered. "Ok. We can catch up tomorrow. Good night,"
"Good night," I reply as they start walking out. Once they are gone, I sit up with a slight pain on my back. 'I should chronicle this in my diary... Meaby later. I just hope they don't find me here. I really should get some sleep,' I thought as I lay back on the bed and drift to sleep.
Little does he know that someone has seen him and is now hiding among the streets and alleys. Watching you. Waiting for your next movements. What for? That is for him to know and us to find out.
It's okay. Need more to see where this goes.
This is a quote from the kingdom hearts wiki. This would mean your characters remaining letters are two u's and a k. What is his real name supposed to be?
8792566
His real name will be revealed in due time my friend. No spoilers... 😜
8792844
So what you're saying is that it doesn't follow canon conventions? Alright I guess.
8792905
Not entirely. I do have a name in mind, It's just... It will be an odd one.
I don't...is this a parody?
8792973
Not a parody. An alternet universe. Takes place after Camp Everfree.
8792995
Thanks. It should be said that my English spelling can be a little off since it's not my primary language, so mistakes are bound to happen. And thanks for the feed back. I'll make sure that the other fights are not as badly written or encountered as the Sora fight.
8793002
I understand, for the most part your spelling was good, I've seen a-lot worse lol.
8793016
Thanks. It might be because I grew up with games that were in English rather than my native. I learned English quite easily in fact.
8793029
That's good, it can really be annoying when a story has bad grammar, but like I said this one wasn't that bad. If you feel scared about it, maybe hiring an editor could help your story, but it doesn't bother me to much.
Also I got to give you credit for posting the story here lol. For the longest time I've wanted to write a KH story for this site, but due to the amount of overly critical people in the comments, it's made me hesitant.
8793036
It's easy when you don't really care if they hate it or love it. It's what you want to do, not what they want you to do. It's just as simple as that.
8793046
I get what you're saying, and I give you props for it. Anyways, can't wait to read more :)