While out in the woods together in a log cabin in the mountains during a 3-day vacation, 8 humans from Earth accidentally find themselves in the magical land of Equestria and now Twilight Sparkle and her friends are their best chance to return home!
tkepner, if you're reading this, please understand that this is my first MLP fanfiction ever and my writing isn't perfect either. I'm only writing this story for entertainment purposes, not to become popular. If you or anyone else who's reading my story doesn't like how I'm writing it or thinks that I'm a terrible writer, then you don't have to read my story if you don't want to.
Like all MLP fanfictions, my story is entirely made up so it doesn't matter if some things seem a bit random or are unrealistic. This is a fictional story made by me, not real life.
tkepner, if you or anyone else does find something in my story that you do like, then I'll appreciate and all positive feedback and comments that you give me as I continue writing this story.
8784792 Its called constructive criticism. You'll encounter quite a bit of it here, but trust me: most of the time, it's given because people believe that you can improve. You have two choices. Either follow their advice, or pull an EV and apologize for absolutely everything and never improve.
8784792 Also, there's a little >> in the top right of every comment card. That's how you reply to a comment and let the person you replied to know that they have a new message.
okay, you should really listen to that grammar/sentencing/phrasing advice from earlier in this thread instead of just shrugging it off like he's just said your story is absolute dog shite which he didn't
8784792 they're not telling you to do these things to become popular, they're telling you these things to try and get you to improve if you yourself say your writing isn't perfect here: 8775828
everyone needs a helping hand now and again
and also
at least some people like one of my friends seems to enjoy it!
I understand that people like you are trying to help me out with my story, but to be honest, this is as good as I can write so it's not going to get any better than this.
I'm sorry if I unintentionally offended you and sounded a bit rude. What matters most to me about my story is that I'm doing the best I can and in the end, that's all anyone can really ask for.
8784901 One of my personal favorite OC human characters is Tony. He smokes, drinks beer and swears a lot, which is exactly how I intended for his character to be like.
8784866 As long as you're getting some enjoyment out of my story, then I'm okay with getting a little constructive criticism, even though I'll still keep writing my story exactly as I have been writing it. Still, as always, it's good to see that people like you are reading my story at all and that alone, is good enough for me.
tkepner, if you're reading this, please understand that this is my first MLP fanfiction ever and my writing isn't perfect either. I'm only writing this story for entertainment purposes, not to become popular. If you or anyone else who's reading my story doesn't like how I'm writing it or thinks that I'm a terrible writer, then you don't have to read my story if you don't want to.
Like all MLP fanfictions, my story is entirely made up so it doesn't matter if some things seem a bit random or are unrealistic. This is a fictional story made by me, not real life.
tkepner, if you or anyone else does find something in my story that you do like, then I'll appreciate and all positive feedback and comments that you give me as I continue writing this story.
8784792
Its called constructive criticism. You'll encounter quite a bit of it here, but trust me: most of the time, it's given because people believe that you can improve. You have two choices. Either follow their advice, or pull an EV and apologize for absolutely everything and never improve.
8784792
Also, there's a little >> in the top right of every comment card. That's how you reply to a comment and let the person you replied to know that they have a new message.
oh dear
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okay, you should really listen to that grammar/sentencing/phrasing advice from earlier in this thread instead of just shrugging it off like he's just said your story is absolute dog shite which he didn't
8784792
they're not telling you to do these things to become popular, they're telling you these things to try and get you to improve if you yourself say your writing isn't perfect here: 8775828
everyone needs a helping hand now and again
and also
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I mean
they're your friend, so...
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that's not a good attitude to have as a writer tbh
I understand that people like you are trying to help me out with my story, but to be honest, this is as good as I can write so it's not going to get any better than this.
I'm sorry if I unintentionally offended you and sounded a bit rude. What matters most to me about my story is that I'm doing the best I can and in the end, that's all anyone can really ask for.
Aside from my writing, what do you guys think of my story so far? Do you like the characters and all my OC human characters?
8784901
One of my personal favorite OC human characters is Tony. He smokes, drinks beer and swears a lot, which is exactly how I intended for his character to be like.
8784901
Sorry for how I acted earlier. If you don't want to accept my apology and no longer wish to read my story, I'm okay with that.
8784866
As long as you're getting some enjoyment out of my story, then I'm okay with getting a little constructive criticism, even though I'll still keep writing my story exactly as I have been writing it. Still, as always, it's good to see that people like you are reading my story at all and that alone, is good enough for me.