The business talk and economics concepts strike me as being a bit dry, but it's necessary given the setting I suppose and plus I find it rather interesting!
I thoroughly enjoy Chrysalis's characterization and role in society as a highly intelligent, top-of-the-class businesswoman, but I also appreciate how she has flaws like her temper for instance. Same goes with Mr. Moore in that he's usually calm but can be outsmarted and isn't impervious to Chrysalis and her personality and tactics. I think they play very well off of each other, and with that being said what I'm really excited to see is how the story develops further with Chrysalis and Moore's relationship. I know it may be a bit too soon for any romantic moments, but boy it doesn't keep the anticipation from building!
I have good hopes for this story, and so far it's looking super promising so I'm definitely on the lookout for the next chapter! Thank you for you writing this so far!
8702887 Thank you very much! It really makes the effort feel worth it, hearing you enjoy all of this. I'll be updating it with the next chapter come tomorrow, so keep your eyes peeled!
Well, Equestria IS based on the US, so disintegrating infrastructure fits.
This has been really good so far!
The business talk and economics concepts strike me as being a bit dry, but it's necessary given the setting I suppose and plus I find it rather interesting!
I thoroughly enjoy Chrysalis's characterization and role in society as a highly intelligent, top-of-the-class businesswoman, but I also appreciate how she has flaws like her temper for instance. Same goes with Mr. Moore in that he's usually calm but can be outsmarted and isn't impervious to Chrysalis and her personality and tactics. I think they play very well off of each other, and with that being said what I'm really excited to see is how the story develops further with Chrysalis and Moore's relationship. I know it may be a bit too soon for any romantic moments, but boy it doesn't keep the anticipation from building!
I have good hopes for this story, and so far it's looking super promising so I'm definitely on the lookout for the next chapter! Thank you for you writing this so far!
8702887
Thank you very much! It really makes the effort feel worth it, hearing you enjoy all of this. I'll be updating it with the next chapter come tomorrow, so keep your eyes peeled!