ok I will admit he is op as hell but I don't particularly have a problem other than that you just need to slow down on the writing a bit getting a bit rushed
So he has the power of superman.. and I doubt ponies have created space grade tech. I doubt you will die anytime soon..., A little bit too much if you ask me, maybe at some point be stripped at least of SOME powers?
Soooo another HIE who has insane literal god powers and seems like a total power trip for the writer, I mean I love some one power op with a bunch of small ones but having literally most of the op powers in one guy? It’s just going to be a story of building a empire in his vision and The comical battles he has to squish people with god powers. People will like it but not a lot.
Ooh, he lives in the forbidden jungle, where does he live? Next to the lakes (swamps?) Or by the temple? Or maybe just in the normal (?) Part of the jungle? My imagination is running wild with the possibilities of which area he could use to his advantage!
8846670 I really like OCs with OP powers because its just straight up entertaining when ponies over react to his massive power or because he is a different species or when he confronts a villain and is like 'i am superior to you now face my wrath!' There are many things boring about them yes, but, they are just stories in the end so just enjoy the experience while it lasts because you only really laugh at a joke only once or twice (depends on how funny it is) and after that it isnt really that funny anymore, so try to make the most of it while you can!
Giving the main character God-like abilities in the first chapter... Cool.
nice concept, poor planning and rushed writing, like most Hie fics. sorry, someone tell me if it gets a rewrite or is just tidied up a bit
Y
ok I will admit he is op as hell but I don't particularly have a problem other than that you just need to slow down on the writing a bit getting a bit rushed
Always willing to read a "MC with nanites" fic, they're so hard to find these days...
So he has the power of superman.. and I doubt ponies have created space grade tech. I doubt you will die anytime soon..., A little bit too much if you ask me, maybe at some point be stripped at least of SOME powers?
Soooo another HIE who has insane literal god powers and seems like a total power trip for the writer, I mean I love some one power op with a bunch of small ones but having literally most of the op powers in one guy? It’s just going to be a story of building a empire in his vision and
The comical battles he has to squish people with god powers. People will like it but not a lot.
Hans...
Get the flammenwerfer.
9007174
?????
Best if i only could give this story 1000 likes i would do it in an instant
9007174
Wir mussen das Fic brennen. Es ist zu dumm zu leben.
This is not papa E
9390062
?????
"He wrote down one last power that he wants: Shaggy
error
Ooh, he lives in the forbidden jungle, where does he live? Next to the lakes (swamps?) Or by the temple? Or maybe just in the normal (?) Part of the jungle? My imagination is running wild with the possibilities of which area he could use to his advantage!
8846670
I really like OCs with OP powers because its just straight up entertaining when ponies over react to his massive power or because he is a different species or when he confronts a villain and is like 'i am superior to you now face my wrath!' There are many things boring about them yes, but, they are just stories in the end so just enjoy the experience while it lasts because you only really laugh at a joke only once or twice (depends on how funny it is) and after that it isnt really that funny anymore, so try to make the most of it while you can!
I Read the entire story once, Forgot everything about it, and now I am reading it again
I'm not exactly one for 'Mary-Sue' characters, but you have my attention.