I do plan on doing more chapters of this at some point but for the moment, I will be taking a break from this one to work on other single chapter stories. At some point, I will also be making a chapter devoted to some of the things Diamond and Spoiled got up to before Filthy came home. (Eventually)

Regardless, hope you enjoy!

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Loved the chapter and glad to hear you're still writing! You said more single chapter stories, will you still be working on A soiled Universe?

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Yes, that story will continue to see new chapters. Currently about 2/3 through it now actually.

While waiting for this chapter to be finished, I did think of a good next logical step for how things could escalate further.
But I'll wait until you're ready for me to send that your way.

I do have an idea for a one shot, though.

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It'll be a bit far in the que but feel free to send it my way whenever.

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Glad to hear!

Oh man, I didn't realize you had made more chapters! I guess I know what I'm doing with my afternoon...

edit: "on hiatus" Well, shit.

The writing of the next chapter will be starting soon, so be on the lookout for when that hits.

Filthy had already Spoiled from and was currently plunging his cock in and out of her messy ponut, every thrust coating his length with a thin layer of brown. Despite having her ponut repeatedly pounded, Spoiled continued to spank Diamond Tiara, again and again, punishing her for messing her diaper.

I think this is a little too much. There is a point something goes from kinky to just plain weird and impractical. It still needs to be possible and having too much going on makes the events seem less significant. You should remove Filthy from the scene.

She, like all of the other kids at school, was still a virgin...at least in the conventional sense. The only pony around her age she knew that wasn't was Applebloom's cousin up in Manehattan who visited Ponyville from time to time. The girl had never really dug too deep into it but apparently when things had gotten pretty desperate in the city, at one point, she had been forced to resort to some...less than moral practices to get by. According to the CMC, she recently got her cutie mark, though based on the story the filly had told her and Silver Spoon, Diamond Tiara wasn't so sure that a pair of scissors represented cutting hair or fabric in her case...

I wonder why DT has value in being a virgin. Can you describe that?

The idea of also using the amulet on her friend while she was here had crossed her mind but she quickly decided it would generally be a bad idea. There were far too many risks involved in using it, plus Silver Spoon's parents would definitely notice a difference in her behavior. Diamond just wished she had better control over the amulet's spell.

That's twisted. That DT doesn't feel a moral revulsion for brainwashing her friend.

Then, without warning, Filthy pulled back his hips and then thrust them forwards hard, suddenly forcing a quarter of his length to penetrate deep into his daughter's pussy.

Maybe it would be better if you didn't do something this drastic. Especially since earlier in the chapter she said she didn't want to.

"Don't you worry, my master, I had felt your deep desire for something different and have done just that for you. Silver Spoon has retained her free will but, as you have no doubt noticed, she should have absolutely no problem with what you and my husband are doing." She explained.

Maybe you could actually not do that. It could really add something if DT has to justify all of this to SS.