Something tells me the dear author has a thing for bread. Also flipping arceus? Really? May as well bring the rest of the legendaries. Also i hope celestia and luna get a big old slice of humble pie to dislodge their heads from their plots.
Following, this is fun and we need mire kitsunes/yoko in fanfictions. Although with the backstory of the kitsune it maked me feel hungry for a mora dramatic version. (Although its impossible cuz this is too goofy for that)
*insert the famous/infamous dr frankenstine line here*
Dont you just hate it when you accidentally create god
.... I don't know what to say.... I was hoping it'll take longer before this stuff happens but I'm wrong.
It would be cool for Samantha to have a Arsenal from daemon x machina
Sunny has officially made me happy.
I shall now wait for the next chapter to be analyzed.
Also, I believe you forgot the ‘t’ in a bunch of words in the paragraph where the main character leaves Twilight’s home.
That’s all for now, hope you have a crazy day!
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Can you please show Sunny these errors? Sunny wouldn't mind correcting them.
Boa Sunny, esse capítulo meio que foi uma surpresa pra mim, realmente não esperava ver um tão cedo
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‘hey’ is supposed to be ‘they’ i believe.
‘his’ as ‘this.’
And ‘he’ instead it’s ‘the.’
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Fixed! Thank you, have a bagel!
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Ooo, BAGEL!
*Proceeds to eat the bagel.*
Have her make a weapon to surpass metal gear.
Pffthahahahah!
How is progress with the next chapter?
Something tells me the dear author has a thing for bread. Also flipping arceus? Really? May as well bring the rest of the legendaries.
Also i hope celestia and luna get a big old slice of humble pie to dislodge their heads from their plots.
I need to see a update pls I like this story
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I love this story
Love the story hope it continues soon
Following, this is fun and we need mire kitsunes/yoko in fanfictions. Although with the backstory of the kitsune it maked me feel hungry for a mora dramatic version. (Although its impossible cuz this is too goofy for that)
Any chance of you continuing this story?