Beyblade Metal Friendship

by DoctorPony

Chapter 1 A Whole New World

Chapter 1: A Whole New World

"Go Pegasus" says Gingka as he battling Kyokas Fang Leone in the bey park in the middle of town.

"Go Now Leone Lion Gale Force Wall" saids Kyoka.

Pegasus hits the tornado "Pegasus Smash Mode " Saids Gingka Pegasus Breaks the Tornado and hits Leone knocking it out of the Statium

"That was a good battle" said Gingka as he runs over to Kyoka, "As good as ever" Saids Kyoya. "But the next time we battle I will win" said Kyoka " When your Ready I'll be waiting for you" Saids Gingka " Go to go see ya" Saids Gingka.

Gingka runs out the park ready to see what else the day might hold for him. But then suddenly a portal opens under him and he starts falling and hits the floor .

"Oh I am so sorry that I am trying to get the hang of the transportation spell wait what are you".

Gingka looks up to see a pony that was slightly purple pony with a little green in her mane and a purplish mane.

"What!" Gingka Yelled " Where am I" Gingka Said

"Equestria" The Pony Said

"Equestria " Said Gingka

"Yes the name of our country" Said The Pony

"And what are you" said the pony

" i am human" said Gingka

"A human I have never seen a human in my life or anypony life" Said The pony

"Which means I accidentally transported you here I'm so sorry" said the pony

"That ok, I know didn't mean to do it" Said Gingka

"Thank you My name is Starlight Gilmmer" Said Starlight

"Nice to meet you starlight my names is Gingka and this is my partner Cosmic Pegasus" Said Gingka as he holds up the beyblade.

"Nice to meet you Gingka what is that" Pointing to Pegasus.

"This is my beyblade" saids Gingka

Starlight Uses her magic to take Pegasus out of Gingka hands and inspects The Bey

"So What it's supposed to do" Said Starlight

"Well you have battles with it you see I use this launcher and launch Pegasus and have sorts of fun battles"

"Mmm So you battle with it " Said Starlight

"Yes" Said Gingka

" Wait I got to show this to twilight" She Runs off and gives Gingka Pegasus back and runs of to find twilight and Gingka follows.

Author's Note:

This is My first Story so please be thoughtful of that sorry that it so short I will try to make them longer

Comments

[Zenaku Okami]

Ok, first, dialogue, really need to improve that.

[DoctorPony]

It's my first chapter I have ever wrote so yea I'll leave it like this to show how the writing evolves

[Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever]

Red for incorrect green for correction.

"Go Pegasus" Says Gingka as he battling Kyokas Fang Leone in bey park in the middle of town.

“Go Pagasus,” says Gingka,

"Go Now Leone Lion Gale Force Wall" saids Kyoka.

Force Wall,” saids Kyoka.

Pegasus hits the tornado "Pegasus Smash Mode " Saids Gingka Pegasus Breaks the Tornado and hits Leone knocking it out of the Statium

“Pegasus Smash Mode,(no space)” saids
Statium.

"That was a good battle" Saids Gingka as he runs over to Kyoka, "As good as ever" Saids Kyoya. "But the next time we battle I will win" Saids Kyoka " When your Ready I'll be waiting for you" Saids Gingka " Go to go see ya" Saids Gingka.

good battle,” saids
“As good as ever,” saids

I gotta go to bed now I’ll check the rest tomorrow.

[Armageden]

I’m addicted to Beyblade.

[Mister E-Nonymous]

You spelled Kyoya wrong.