Well. . . . I could be that guy and hate on it but I am going to just say that I am out on this story.

Hope you make dramatic improvements and wish you the best.

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*Despite the lateness*

you and I have different defs of "IMPROVEMENT" and mine is as follows: "If I don't like it, it's NOT an improvement, but just the opposite "A Disgrace"

“I second that!” sneered Celestia “Never have a known any creature as despicable and as cold-hearted as you! You are destroying entire civilizations and killing innocent beings, yet you haven’t a shred of remorse to show for it?!”

King Sombra don’t ring a bell to anyone? Storm King? Tempest Shadow?

She took a look at herself in a small puddle of water, and she thought she looked just abnormal with half of a horn.

Hey, if tempest can make it work, then so can you.

“Look, I hate to say this…” Applejack said as she rubbed her eyes, “But… maybe we ought to think about where we are.”

“Applejack!” snapped Rarity “How can you even think such a thing at a time like this?! We just lost our world and all our friends as well!”

She’s saying it like it’s a bad idea.

As for the stranger, he had lost sight of the ponies as it was hard to keep a close watch on them, when suddenly, he noticed all the explosions and powers emitting from the city. “No!” he cried “They are back! I shall have to deal with them first and then see to the three teams.”

He’s gonna fight them?