Loops
"Is somepony there? Doctor?" Young Ditzy called.
"Stay quiet." The Doctor whispered, "Not a word."
The Doctor sighed as they both hid in the tulips, soon another stallion appeared, a brown one who looked exactly like the Doctor, because he was in fact.
"Hello Ditzy." The other Doctor said as he approached the filly.
"Hi Doctor!" Ditzy said standing up and jumping around him. She always got excited when the Doctor was here.
"What day is this?" The Doctor whispered to Ditzy, "I can't remember it."
"How should I know, I have nearly the worst memory." Ditzy whispered back.
"Good point." The Doctor said as they both continued to watch the scene.
"So little Ditzy Doo," The other Doctor said mussing up young Ditzy's hair, to which the other Ditzy instinctively tried to push it down even though it wasn't being touched, "What did you learn in school?"
As the two others talked Ditzy looked over at the Doctor, "How are there two of you?"
"Its quite simple actually, we are in a day that loops, so since I was here once, it makes it so that everyday when this day loops, it makes it go again with me already in it, therefore I can be at the place once. The loop runs on the day that happened last, so the first time I visited on this day is copied into the loop's memory so it's replaying the day over and over again, in other words we are in a place where we are already." The Doctor whispered, "Any questions?"
"Just one, if we were to go out and show ourselves, wouldn't that create a time paradox?" Ditzy whispered.
"I suppose it would, it could affect your adult life and mine as well, we are not going to risk that, ever played the game Metal Gear Solid?" The Doctor asked.
"Um no, what does that have anything to do with it." Ditzy said.
"Well in that game you are a pony spy and there are guards, if you get spotted you get hurt and it can affect stuff, apply that to here." The Doctor said.
"Since when do you play video games?" Ditzy whispered.
"Since they were invented, they are quite fun, I mean its just fun to know that you control this little tiny character and-" The Doctor began.
"Shhhh!" Ditzy said sticking a hoof in the Doctors mouth.
When she pulled her hoof out the Doctor said one thing, "You taste like muffins."
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"Ok we can go now," The Doctor said, "You and I have left, so we can get back in and fix the TARDIS."
"Do you have the tools to do it?" Ditzy asked.
"Of course I do, I always have a spare kit and the sonic screwdriver in the TARDIS." The Doctor said laughing.
"C'mon lets just get in." Ditzy said pulling the Doctor in the TARDIS.
Once they were inside the Doctor got to work trying to fix it. Ever so often he asked for Ditzy to grab something for him something. Soon it had become the next day, the day had looped.
"Doctor? Does every day loop?" Ditzy asked.
"Every day in that is before the present day does, the world has set itself so it can tell what days to loop and what days it shouldn't. Its quite remarkable, that means instead of your world just having lava and changelings below it, there is actually something telling the world to loop days." The Doctor said smiling.
"Ok so I have like yesterday always looped right? But doesn't that mean that we would be out there too, in that loop? Because you said the loop will copy us into it." Ditzy said.
"You mean the loop outside," The Doctor said his eyes widening, "oh no."
Just then there were whispers outside as the Doctor and Ditzy talked.
"Ok we have to get out of here now!" The Doctor said rushing around the TARDIS, punching in commands.
"Um, ok!" Ditzy said as she sat down.
"Ok lets see, set time and set place..." The Doctor mumbled to himself.
The TARDIS soon lurched into motion as it began to move through time and space.
"Doctor? Is this completely safe?" Ditzy asked.
"It's 99.9% safe, there is a .1% chance that we will get sucked into time and be dead, but that's just .1!" The Doctor said going over the controls.
"Ok Doctor, that's the part where you say, "Its ok Ditzy, its completely safe and there's no way you could get hurt.", not that I could die!" Ditzy sighed.
"But that would be lying, oh and sit down, the TARDIS could move during the trip, no falling." The Doctor said sitting down next to her.
"You've never lied? Like never ever?" Ditzy asked smiling.
"Well no not really, I did once say a unicorn wasn't fat but that's only because he had his horn pointed directly at me." The Doctor said laughing.
"Doctor," Ditzy said quietly, "Is everypony going to be ok?"
The Doctor looked over at Ditzy, "They'll be fine, as will you, I will make sure of it." He whispered.
Ditzy smiled and rested her head in the Doctor's lap and soon fell asleep.
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The TARDIS usually didn't take so long to get somewhere, but it seemed it was going slower, probably from the landing and getting hurt.
As the TARDIS landed the Doctor shook Ditzy awake, "We're here, Ditzy wake uppppp."
"Meh, I wanna sleeeeep." Ditzy said trying to get back to bed.
"You've been sleeping for awhile it's time to wake up." The Doctor said still shaking her.
"Fine, fine! I'm up, I'm up." Ditzy yawned.
"Well good, because it's going to be a long day." The Doctor said.
The two opened the TARDIS doors, expecting to see Ponyville, instead they got a much different sight.
"Doctor, where is this?" Ditzy said looking around.
"The Canterlot gardens it seems, that's strange, it should have brought us to Ponyville..." The Doctor trailed off.
"Uhm Doctor," Ditzy said trying not to scream, " don't blink."
"Why?" The Doctor said turning around to reveal a terrible sight.
All around the TARDIS were Weeping Angels, their faces shaded by their hooves.
"Well, this is where all statues are made and such... Maybe, we should uhm get back in the TARDIS..." The Doctor gulped.
AN: Yay! Weeping Angels! Aren't they fun? Thanks for liking and faving, all the support is awesome, thank you all so much!
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HOLY SHIT THE STORY GOT FEATURED! HOLY FUCKING SHIT! oh my lord, thank you all, this couldn't have happened without all of you! Thank you so much!
951917
She isn't exactly an aunt, but I used one of the people from the other main 6, I really like Vinyl so I decided to use her.... I suppose if you want to call her auntie that would be fine
951922
Yes, I always saw that phones and other technology are used, I mean there's a bowling place and ponies didn't make bowling balls to suit their hooves.
951937
Interpret him how you want, I stuck with a traditional scarf even though he doesn't wear it alot...
i once put the weeping angels mod into minecraft then i made a massive castle and turned on the mod wich says they are supposed to be realy rare. 4 seconds after it was on i turned around and counted 17 weeping angels. and u cant deactivate the mod once its on. rare my flank..... lets just say i deleted my minecraft after the 50th or so death also grats on being featured
951956
Hahaha, I really like that mod, I have it in fact, and lets just say I was screaming when I saw the first one, and thank you so much!
951961
He is a pony, but I made it so he regenerates into either a pegasus, unicorn, or earth pony. I thought it would be easier to do that instead of human because first, with Ditzy it wouldn't make sense and second its so much fun to make a ponified version of him.
951962 well i almost crapped myself first time i used it
my soloution for the angels was simple dig a 3 block hole wait for said angel to fall in. replace top block ploblem solved forever. (little filly) but what happenss when u run ou- (me) FOREVER!
951974
In other words, you can never mine again or dig for that matter...
Congrats on getting featured!
951975
Yep, I couldn't forget that!
951960
Call Ditzy what you wish, it doesn't matter to me really, I like her but that of course is my opinion.
951987
I don't call her Derpy only Ditzy, I have always called her that, and also why muffin cunt? Like why that name?
AWESOME! I didn't even realize you wrote this until I reread life in the fast clouds then checked your latest stories! Ditzy Doo is awesome!
951994 Cuz she likes muffins and she's a girl. I like certain girls, if ya know what I mean.
952000
Oh sexual innuendo, what are you doing there?
951976 see thats where ur wrong... buildcraft ftw just get automated quarries
Rule # 1 the Doctor lies. And weeping angels are the best Doctor Who creature.
952015
I just scream and back away slowly, I'm so glad you don't blink in Minecraft...
952022
He doesn't lie too often, if you've seen the episode Flesh and Stone when Rose is dying he tells her she's going to die, I just put that into my story along with some other things...
952023 once i was running for it and i only had glass so i made a glass wall around me.... they were still moving even though i could see them through the glass.... and i diddnt relise one had somhow got in there with me..... i think u can guess what happened.... i had diamonds to
952034
I've only watched series 5 and 6 and a few episodes with David Tennant but I do know who Rose is. When you get to Matt Smith then you will understand.
952037
The ultimate horror in Minecraft! And with those diamonds, dear lord!
952038
I've been having to watch the whole series to get this story accurate, it's a bit of a pain in the ass. But its totally worth it since you all like the story!
952041 i got my revenge though .... it was simple realy just too many items and the more exsplosives mod ..... mega nukes 1 weeping angels.....( talis amount of deaths) about 346 .... ur move angels .... ur move
952047
Yes I do enjoy it alot ^_^
952048
I always feel like an evil person doing that, like setting up a whole trap and stuff... MWAHAHAAHAHA!
952067
Its in there, keep on readinggggg! I didn't make him use it all the time and I'm sorry for that!
i once spent 9 hours on an automated traap system where mobs such as zombies and creepers not spiders though unfortuantly, would fall down into an automated factorie where pistons would push them around in glass to ne of numourous deaths. there was squished in glass death by lava drowning arow canons a gient drop... and the was even (because f one of the many mods i use... not sure wich one though) a massive drill that would comedown and shred up to 173 creepers at a time
rainbow factories got nothing on me
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952080
Hahaha, don't doubt me, I really love writing and basically if I had a cutie mark it would be a pencil to show that.
952082
Let us see maybe there will be maybe not...
I see this is still a live conversation. Good story so far. Only thing that could make it better (in my humble opinion) is to see the sonic screwdriver in action in this story. Faved and liked keep on going.
952097
Oopsies, sorry bout that, it happens to the best of us. Trust Vinyl! She's great with kids, she's only set two houses on fire!
952104
Ok I'm sorry but for the last time, its going to be there you have to wait! Ok, sorry to yell but I know about the screwdriver and it will be there but you have to wait a bit.
952137
All right. I just needed to know that it would be there. If it wasn't I was going to get worried...
952150
I have to find the right place to put it in and such but it's hard to do that. I do plan ahead but then I add details and stuff
K then.
yay!!! you used the sonic! this story is coming along nicely. keep it up!
weeping... angel...pony... crap just crap were in trouble now
The game is called Metal Gear.