She-Demon Sunset was close to victory of defeating Twilight and her friends, but one Sentry stood in her way unleashing some demonic beat-down. Thought that's the start of this devilish adventure.
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What is this a crossover of?
So wait, Twilight's not in his harem? Why?! Eh, nice to see a story that treats Flash well though. Though I gotta say, this chapter does have some weird transitions and lost words, but it works well. Oh, and Derpy should have totally be part of the harem. Love Derpy...and Trixie. Oh, and Lemon Zest, as their personalities would work well.
I'll give you an upvote. Keep up the work and I can see this gem beginning to shine.
KO, Devil May Cry.
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KO thanks for your Opinion. The reason That neither the Twilights’ from both worlds aren’t gonna be in it because the pony Twilight has her duty as princess and may bump into pony Timber Spruce someday and the human Twilight has a thing with the Human Timber, so there’s that.
Hope you tell all your friends about my story!
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No problem. I personally always wanted to write a Flash Sentry harem story...but I could never do it. I'm just not a good clop writer.
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KO life isn’t always easy, dude.
Enjoy the story with your friends!
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True. Thanks.
will the actual Dante appear in a chapter as Flash's Mentor?
Interesting concept, will be sure to keep reading upcoming chapters. Yet personally i can't see:Rainbow Dash, Applejack and Pinkie Pie with Flash, don't know why. Maybe Rarity and Fluttershy. Heck The dazzlings seem to be an interesting idea(saw a story were Flash gave them a place to stay and that idea has been in my head for a while).
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KO well, those three are my most favorite characters of the Mane 7 (EG) and want to give them a chance in the spotlight. Also what the name of that story?
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Is your story. Also the story is called To House Sirens
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KO thanks and hope you tell all your friends about Equestria Girls’ Devil Sentry!
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You know, there's a power ranger/sentai series that could have worked in what you are trying to do. It's called Garo. Here's a quick review by a fellow brony:
allrighty the, i liked the premise, DMC is always welcome, but you need to work your grammar, small stuff can bunch themselves together and tire out any readers.
second, you need to work on your build up, you have to hype people up to the possible outcomes.
i can only give you this so far, but good luck continuing.
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KO thanks I’ll do my best!
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Why do you type KO?( knock out)
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KO no, never seen it.
I wonder since you are open for suggestions on who would be in the harem in this story, I wonder if you are open for suggestions for who would be in who's harem in the Devil Spirit of Equestria story?
I've been re-reading this story's chapters again. Honestly anxious and excited on what happens next in this story and the Devil Spirit of Equestria story. I wonder if the next chapters for both is coming next month or in May?
Like this one?