this better not be over I want....no need more of this story and by celestia's big flank (sorry tia) I hope it's sooner rather than later.

Right in the feels

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Oh it's far from over. And I'm gonna make sure this story exceeds your expectations

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ikr, I practically cried when I wrote that part

Holy crap we're already at Rainbow?! Man i need to catch up on these.

Whew! Right in the feels, bro!

I have wanted a story about Rainbow Dash like this, keep up the good work

It's been a week, when will the next chapter come out, your stories are fast mostly

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It's difficult when you're writing several different stories

You've been living by yourself for a while and stayed cooped up in your room playing your video games way too often, but your mom worries about you isolating yourself, but you say you're fine.

Sounds about right. A second-person shipfic with emotional issues? I'm down for that. That being said, this story could use a proofreader...

Just then, one customer want a bacon double cheeseburger with a medium sized orange soda and a side order of medium fries with ketchup.

One of several examples of grammar errors I found. Also as an example, I'd change it to:

Jone customer wanted a bacon double cheeseburger

Yaawn.

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Not to your liking?

I loved it

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Dude, don't be mean. It was sweet. If you don't like things that are sweet, go find a gore fic or something.

ARE WE BUTTON MASH? CUS IF WE ARE THEN YOU WILL BE EXTERMINATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Like it already, mother son relationship issues and Rainbow is the only one who got him to absolve it in a casual way. plus a bonus that he already has his mind on her since high school, wonder when he make his move

This is literally me now, except I’m in college