Chapter 11 - The Beginning of the End [Edited]
Chapter 11 – The Beginning of the End
* Warning! This Chapter is going to be short to set up for the next chapter. You have been warned*
*Twi’s POV*
As you pace around your room you decide to go to Tempest and ask her yourself who she was talking to and what they meant by package.
*Tempest’s POV*
You start to put your sleep wear on until you hear a knock on the door, “Who is it?” you ask
“It’s me, Twilight, I want to talk,” she says through the door.
“Okay, come in,” you say with a hint of suspicion.
Twilight enters your room and takes a seat on the bed. She turns and looks at you, “I want to ask a couple of questions, okay,” she asks you.
“I’ve already answered…” you say before Twilight cuts you off.
“Who were you talking to when I passed by your room just now,” she asks; you start to panic, you decide to make sure no one stops you, you have to petrify her, you pull out a black and green orb from your cast and throw it at her.
She instantly turns to stone, “Good, now I need to get her into her own room and tell them she’s not feeling well, and they’ll be none the wiser,” you quietly say to yourself.
After throwing the petrified Twilight into her own room. You go downstairs the next morning, and see that Cam is getting ready for school, so you decide to get ready yourself.
“Twilight not coming to school today?” he asks while continuing to pack his bag.
“No, she told me she wasn’t feeling well last night, and I helped her to bed,” you tell him while packing your bag as well.
You both finish packing up and get going to school.
As you walk to school you decide to strike up a conversation, “So, want to meet me in the place we first met at during our break today?” you ask seductively.
“Ya, sure, I don’t mind,” he says without facing you.
*Tia’s POV*
You, Luna, and Cadence have been up for a while now and you find it weird that Twilight isn’t up yet, “I think I’ll go check on her,” you tell the others as you stand up.
“Okay,” they respond in a trance like state. You turn to look at what has them in a trance and you see it’s one of those “soap drama” sort of shows they’re watching, you roll your eyes not know how they like that horrible show.
You walk upstairs and walk to Twilight’s door. *Knock* *Knock* *Knock* “Twilight, you in there,” you ask… no response, “Twilight, some of us are worried about you,” … still no response, “Okay Twilight, I’m coming in,” you grab the doorknob and open the door. What you see shocks you, “EVERYONE GET UP HERE NOW,” you yell.
Everyone comes up including Amber. They all see what’s happened to Twilight, “Who, or what did this to her,” Cadence says in a mix of shock and anger,
“I don’t know, but I think I can reverse it,” Amber says as she pulls out a talisman and says something along the lines of “Free this… from this… and,” that was all you could understand.
As soon as Twilight comes out of the petrification, she turns to all of you, “We need to get after Tempest now,” she says in a commanding tone,
“Whoa, Twilight calm down,” you tell her,
“How can I calm down when Tempest is trying to give some sort of package to someone that wants nothing but power, how can I calm down,” she says as she tries to push you and the others out of the way.
“Okay, we believe you,” you grab her shoulders to turn and face you, “Now, tell us everything you know,” you tell her.
-End of Chapter 11-
I hope you all stick around for the finale of the first arc, which, by the way, is the next chapter, I hope you all enjoyed these chapters and I hope you all decide to read the finale of the first arc.
Sorry for posting this late, My internet decided to die on me for a day, I hope you ladies and gentlemen that read this, hope you enjoy this semi-finale chapter. The finale for this arc will be posted next week. Hope you all enjoy your weekend. 
Only minor edits needed to be done. hope you all enjoy the now official starting of Arc II. *I'll be starting to work on it now that these chapters have been edited*
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Don't you hate it when your comments don't get a response?
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Ya, but oh well, I've learned to put up with it. But thanks for the comment. Hope you participate in the contests for this series and the other contests. (Rules are in blog posts) hope you participate.
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I am also intrigued and shall be following this till the end.
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Thanks. I hope you do. The finale of this arc is the next chapter and the second arc will be made after I've edited all of these chapters and made them sound better. I would also like you to be a second set of eyes on my fic. please PM me if you are interested.
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Done and I'll do what I can. :)