Ehh... This story has its flaws... MANY flaws but it seems a bit interesting.
Eh. I don't see why he's complaining. He did just get his horn sucked by Chrysalis.
Grammar is a thing.
I think you meant consolation. I'm not going to read this to find out.
926417Yeah, I think grammar is going to be the main problem for me.
Ignoring all of the grammatical errors and whatnot that have already been pointed out: Not too shabby. I laughed pretty hard at "It was the only way to make him shut up."
956990I laughed as well when I was typing it.
Ehh... This story has its flaws... MANY flaws but it seems a bit interesting.
Eh. I don't see why he's complaining. He did just get his horn sucked by Chrysalis.
Grammar is a thing.
I think you meant consolation. I'm not going to read this to find out.
926417
Yeah, I think grammar is going to be the main problem for me.
Ignoring all of the grammatical errors and whatnot that have already been pointed out: Not too shabby. I laughed pretty hard at "It was the only way to make him shut up."
956990
I laughed as well when I was typing it.