Rarity finds herself thrown into a dying Equestria. Armed with nothing but her wits and a voice over the radio she must fight for survival in a world where being alive means nothing.
I can't help but feel like I'm partly responsible for giving you the idea to do these horrible things to poor Rarity because of my previous comment.
As for the pacing I think it's pretty good. It didn't feel too fast or too slow or anything like that. Then again, I'm a really positive person that sucks at noticing the bad aspects of stories unless it's painfully obvious. But I still think you're doing an amazing job.
So Rarity gets her first look at structure gel, and I have a feeling that she's going to become VERY familiar with it later on. And she did the weird dead body... memory... sound... absorb... thingy TM.
And last but not least my theory that she could walk on clouds was proven correct! Yes! That means my other theory that Rarity is going to survive and none of the bad things that happen in the game is going to happen to her right!?
Great stuff so far, - been trying to write one myself, but with Pinkie Pie (since she had her head scanned in the Pinkie Sense episode) but it just didn't seem to go anywhere.
I can't help but feel like I'm partly responsible for giving you the idea to do these horrible things to poor Rarity because of my previous comment.
As for the pacing I think it's pretty good. It didn't feel too fast or too slow or anything like that. Then again, I'm a really positive person that sucks at noticing the bad aspects of stories unless it's painfully obvious. But I still think you're doing an amazing job.
So Rarity gets her first look at structure gel, and I have a feeling that she's going to become VERY familiar with it later on. And she did the weird dead body... memory... sound... absorb... thingy TM.
And last but not least my theory that she could walk on clouds was proven correct! Yes! That means my other theory that Rarity is going to survive and none of the bad things that happen in the game is going to happen to her right!?
...right?
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Oh don't worry, this was going to happen regardless!
Thanks!
Of course, I'd never let anything bad happen to Rarity! Nope, never!
The pacing seems fine to me, I'm not a fan of stories that drag on too much at the start without giving us answers.
Also, does pdf in this world stand for pony document file?
Oh a Soma crossover...
Can’t wait to read.
Oh no! I’m caught up... darn
Welp, time to wait for the next chapters
Great stuff so far, - been trying to write one myself, but with Pinkie Pie (since she had her head scanned in the Pinkie Sense episode) but it just didn't seem to go anywhere.
high tech magical facility is running on microsoft windows.....
now i know why everything gone wrong.