Oh god, Sonata's mental pilot light has gone out. :D

I noticed a few tense changes, and there's a messed-up italics tag...

"i]Well, the other day I told Adagio she looked like she was gaining weight which I thought was super weird because she was always so obsessed with her figure then she told me she had a bun in the oven and I was like 'oooh buns’ and ran to the kitchen to see how far along they were and the oven was empty!”

But other than that, it's good. Funny as all hell. :D

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Fixed the tag send me the tenses and ill fix those too thankies ;)

"Okay, I think I've got it. You said that sex could happen between any two people right? So how would two girls have sex?” Sonata asked with a wink.

It was in that moment Twilight realized she'd fucked up.

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What's the splendid universe?

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time after time(4) Heir to a silenced blood(3) heartbeat(2) and duet beneath a setting sun(1).

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Oh ok! I loved those stories! Can't wait for future Time After Time chapters!

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Im glad im working on the third chapter its just taking me alittle bit longer then expected cause of a combo of writers block and wanting to write this story

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Thats understandable

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Ive got about 1/3 done and squeee im so happy this is doing well

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