Shit! This is good. Well written... Good job!

8338452 Thanks! Glad you like it! I was trying hard for a good balance of tension without having to actually do anything drastic and I think it worked out. I should also mention that the second section, about Passion and finding out about the law, was only re-written by me. The original is by Silverstreak.

8338467 Aye, but she's just a dumb little filly after all.

Both Celestia And Twilight can take those "laws" and shove them up each others ASSES!
I know incest isn't the best thing, but my fucking God it is nowhere near bad enough to have those punishments!
and I hope as punishment Celestia is forced to suffer the same treatment as the other mares
interesting story

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hm funny you mention God there... Celestia IS practically the Goddess of ponykind... when something come from there lots of people just obey...
There is still issues with how this laws passed a so short time ago, nine decades are just ninety years...

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Here's the problem. History is too hard for people to grasp and think it always was static to today. Lots of things go right down the memory hole.

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don't blame twilight she was just following the rules

DUDE!! I just couldn't continue. The story is great, but I really can't get the images out of my head.

I get this higurashi-vibe from this chapter.

8469387 You could always skip the second chapter and read the sex-only final chapter. That's why I did that, after all.