A cosplayer and fan of a certain anime sent to the magical land of Equestria, although it was very different from the show. Now as part of a very powerful clan he must not let his power blind him or he will follow the same path as a certain goddess.
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You have my interest good sir/madam.
I will be following the story. keep up the good work.
MORE!?
More!!!!! Please.
when the next chapter be update on?
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If everything goes as I planned, someday next week.
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Yessssssssssssss
Before I read this, what is the Gore tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?
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A few descriptions of violence, maybe torture and surgery, but that's later.
The surgery and experiments are more likely.
The violence will be like Naruto, Hunter x Hunter or Inuyasha's levels of violence.(The manga not the anime)
Think of it as shounen almost seinen level of violence.
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I will put a author's note on the top warning about.
THERE IS SO MUCH ANIME TROPES!
The whole female dragon was fine but then you had to include cup sizes which kind of bothered me. The quick quips you make when describing Zecora, Jewel and Nightmare Moon makes it look like I'm reading this with the perspective to a pervert (I know there's a Sex tag but even then you need to restrict those very detailed descriptions).
Nightmare Moon is more carefree and that's another thing the bothers me; at one point I had to remind myself that "Moon" is Nightmare Moon and not just some OC you made because Nightmare Moon's personality should be more prideful, mischevious and selfish.
Finally the usual trope of "the main character gets a harem but is too oblivious to notice it" Kazuki might be able to sense the lust coming out from the females but the fact that he couldn't act on it, well it might as well have to be an oblivious character.
I find this story interesting plotwise but the application is lacking. Immediately on the first chapter, after Kazuki gets Displaced *WHAM* 1000 year time skip! You don't even show his reaction when he came upon Equestria, it would have been nice if you included Kazuki, Celestia, Luna and Discord's interactions whilst leaving time skips that are much shorter.
Anyways's that's just my opinion, you can continue writing the way you want. Unfortunately after reading chapter 2 I knew it then that I wouldn't like this story. I hope this story goes well!
Peace~
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Ok, as for the pervert part, I happen to like ecchi and other anime with fanservice.
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Fixed.