I'm curious as to why Rumble was chosen for this instead of Tender Taps.
Is it because you used Thunderlane in the first chapter?

The crooked smile on his shaft made this all possible though

Eh... How am I supposed to not read this as the dick having a mouth/lips and smiling?

As he walked towards the door, he looked back at Apple Bloom. She was on the ground, panting, her face in the puddle of cum that was on the floor, cum still leaking out of her. She was licking it up, trying to get more and more of the smell and taste inside of her to be a good little slut. To properly worship the cocks she loved.

Holy SHIT that's hot...