Thrown into a new world after his was destroyed, Talisman finds a girl in need of help.
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Can we look at what happened to the Crusaders?
8209567 I am planning something with them. Probably in a chapter or two.
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Think about it. They pushed some students to suicide. I'm surprised their sisters aren't receiving harassment for what their sisters did and caused.
Ok, this is a nice Wish fulfillment story so far. I was looking for something to read with some nice things happening to Sunset after the Anon-a-miss incident, and this is fun. Also, not a bad OC, still a Gary Stu, but fits the story and he is funny enough.
I think the only thing I can gripe about is the romance. it was fast and it felt a little creepy, you know? Like, she didn't seem to have any other option than to fall for him. But hey that is just my opinion.
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Maybe I'm assuming too much but this
combined with fact, that author already has at least one main character who is hemafrodite (maybe he has more, I still don't read all of his fanfiction) with addition of fact that MC already can be mistaken with girl/female...... Well, let's my put it that way, i predicted that soon we will be able to call him both Gary Stu and Mary Sue (I always liked something like that, so much fun and chaos).
Also, OP character is good and funny to reading about, as long as it fits into the story (and story is good) and this story is like it so far is so I don't see any problem here.
8210155 8209699 This is a situation where magic can not be the best thing because sometimes it can have a mind of its own. And while some of my characters can be very OP, one of them who won't be in this story is on the level of 'Destroyer of Worlds", they realize that they are OP and do what they can to nerf themselves. Pulling punches or usually just trying to stay out of it. As far as the speed of how quickly the relationship started, you have to remember that both Sunset and Talisman are mentally several years older than their physical appearance. So while maybe it was a little quick, but the pair is a lot more mature than their peers even if they don't always act like it.
8210197 He is not a Gary Stu because he is OP, he is a Gary Stu because he is, in the confines of your own story, the perfect kid. Gosh, even if you took away all the magical otherworldly stuff (don't do it, it is fun) he would still be a Gary Stu. But it is fine, this is a Wish fulfillment story after all.
The situation in which Sunset was put on, is what made their relationship kinda creepy with how fast it started, nothing to do with the age. Now, I admit it is a matter of my preferences. Again, this is a wish fulfillment story, so it makes complete sense that your character and Sunset hook up immediately. However, If this were a more complex story (or reality for that matter), it would be pretty creepy, and the beginnings of a potentially bad relationship. Sunset had nowhere and no one to go to, she had basically no choice in the matter of staying with him, and with her state of mind she would have go, even if he really wasn't as nice. Then there is the White Knight Syndrome, not a good reason to fall in love if you ask me; and if he wasn't a saint Gary Stu, potential for a lot of abuse. BUT it is obvious that there isn't anything like that hidden in the story. Just a goody two shoes helping and being cool and stuff to make Sunset happy, and I love that. ^_^d
8209635 They probably are, but it hasn't been mentioned yet. Likely because they don't want Sunset feeling guilty.
Otakushy's been a thing since that one Nightmare Night episode with the cutouts.