Thrown into a new world after his was destroyed, Talisman finds a girl in need of help.
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I kinda feel Applejack, Rarity and Rainbow not being able to concentrate bcoz of the Anon A Miss thing
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TBH, I don’t blame them for it. I mean if I once ditched a friend who’s innocent, only to find out that my sibling (or viewed-as sibling in Rainbow’s and Scootaloo’s case) was truly the one who hurt me and I can’t see him/her for 10 years, I obviously have a lot on my chest to focus on other things.
Honestly, I have no issue of the plot or that you’re OC is rather OP, but the details and pacing need work. I mean, glossing over the CMC’s trial? Just going on with the sentence. Honestly, there has to be some defense in their favor. 10 years seems kinda steep for minors. They never meant to cause anyone to due, so they should be charged with involuntary manslaughter. There’s also other charges like the cyber-bullying to be considered. I mean, how did their parents react and all that?
Plus, Applejack and Rarity will probably stuck with an empty room in their house.
It's too bad Fluttershy is against futa. As a Fluttershy fan I would hope for her to be in the polyamorous relationship with sunset and talisman.