How long had it been? A thousand maybe a thousand and some odd years? I hurt them both... so, so much. They won't want me back. I don't deserve to be back in their lives. But... I owe to them to try. I owe it to her... to make it all up.
Decent start except for 2 things. 18 inches just seems way too big, even for a sex demon and the stor feels like it might start a little better if instead Celestia accused Theo of turning Luna into Nightmare Moon (even unintentionally) and attacked him, driving him away. Might be unrealistic given their relationship before hand, but you can understand how females can/will easily judge things based on their emotions at the time rather then keeping a level head in the situation.
Decent start except for 2 things. 18 inches just seems way too big, even for a sex demon and the stor feels like it might start a little better if instead Celestia accused Theo of turning Luna into Nightmare Moon (even unintentionally) and attacked him, driving him away. Might be unrealistic given their relationship before hand, but you can understand how females can/will easily judge things based on their emotions at the time rather then keeping a level head in the situation.
Celestia: you can fuck my sister
Theo: yey :D thnx!
Boi! The reaction to what she said though.