Once again, you misspelled the Rabbit's name. At this point, I'm half expecting Angel to make an appearance as Sgt. Nicholas Angel for at least one scene. Just to reiterate, the rabbit's name is Angel, not "Angle"
It's still a fun read, but you probably should have had someone do some last bit of proofreading before posting the chapter. It's almost never a good sign when there's at least one error in the first paragraph.
8097659 No prob, found a few others while reading but the fist one I spotted was that. And now that I think about it, Angel dressed as the main protagonist of Hot Fuzz does seem a bit in character for him, I can just imagine him commissioning Rarity for the outfit only to be wearing it when Silent Learner returns home.
8097670 A parody movie, and one of the better ones in my opinion. Here's a trailer
, it's been a few years since the movie came out so you can find it for rental to go and check out. One of the jokes in the film, at least for a while, is that the newspaper keeps getting his name his name wrong by calling him "Angle" instead of Angel, seeing as Angel is literally his last name and he was moved to the town for plot reasons, take it as you will.
Once again, you misspelled the Rabbit's name. At this point, I'm half expecting Angel to make an appearance as Sgt. Nicholas Angel for at least one scene. Just to reiterate, the rabbit's name is Angel, not "Angle"
It's still a fun read, but you probably should have had someone do some last bit of proofreading before posting the chapter. It's almost never a good sign when there's at least one error in the first paragraph.
8097652 Thank you. That always gets me for some reason. Angel and Angle. Again, thanks.
8097659 No prob, found a few others while reading but the fist one I spotted was that. And now that I think about it, Angel dressed as the main protagonist of Hot Fuzz does seem a bit in character for him, I can just imagine him commissioning Rarity for the outfit only to be wearing it when Silent Learner returns home.
8097667 What's Hot Fuzz?
8097670 A parody movie, and one of the better ones in my opinion. Here's a trailer
, it's been a few years since the movie came out so you can find it for rental to go and check out. One of the jokes in the film, at least for a while, is that the newspaper keeps getting his name his name wrong by calling him "Angle" instead of Angel, seeing as Angel is literally his last name and he was moved to the town for plot reasons, take it as you will.
8097677 And Angel is which one again?
8097691 just watch the video, it should be obvious. And if not, just watch the film.
opportunity.
8097693 Thank you.
8097740 Thank you.
Why doesn't Silent Learner have WINGS ?