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Dark Nightshade


I like to do occasional crossoves, and I can now draw. Just PM me if you want me to draw or wright something! I'm on Wattpad, check me out: https://www.wattpad.com/user/Dark-Nightshade

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AUgh what is that cover pic

8080321 That was my attempt at drawing Silent Learner. Obviously, it needs work.

8080346 you could also ask if anyone is artistically inclined ask one of those people to do the piece,
I'm sure some folks would welcome the chance for practice.

8080386 Actually, someone just asked.

8080507 no offense but that sounds like a much better idea

8080815 I know. Usually I do better than that, but I totally deped on this one.

8080844 why'd not ask Senseidezzy to make Silent Learner for you just like (s)he did for you Dainty Pleasure.

8080852 That's who drew her? I saw it in a group challenge by Silvak.

8080855 the name artist that fusion of rarity and pinkie, long with fusion of twilight/trixie and rainbow/pinkie.

8080882 Awesome. Can I find her or him on devientart?

8080886 I don't think (s)he on devientart? But I do know the link to Here and do you wanted you can also ask for fusion of rainbow and applejack after this story too.

8080898 Awesome! Thanks! That Trixie/Twilight and Pinkie/Rainbow Dash fusion picture is adorable!

8080943 thank so are you already ask senseidezzy for you request?

8080952 I already almost have one. The person who wanted to draw her is almost done.

8080971 almost done? Wow that was fast! And your other request?

An error in the first sentence is usually not a good sign

Twilight nocked on Fluttershy's door.

I think that was supposed to be "Twilight knocked on Fluttershy's door." You might want to get Grammarly to help you out, it's free to download and it has additional addons that can be applied to web browsers to provide that extra writing help during posting and talking to others online.

You probably should have to wait a bit before you posted this, obvious errors in the first paragraph are never a in the first paragraph are never a good sign.

8081007 Yeah, I probably should have. Stupid excitement.

8080995 I only had that one request.

8081050 I didn't request that one, that was part of a challenge.

8081142 Now I'm slightly confuse. Was that it?

8081161 no and what challenge?

8081173 Someone under the username of silivak had made a challenge using that picture. Howeve, for the moment, I am going to have to take this story off the cite. You know, for editing and what not.

Wait a minute... is that your new cover for this?

8081544 The picture or the story?

Angle got to them and ate them all,

I'm pretty sure you meant to say Angel, last I checked this wasn't the paper from Hot Fuzz. Speaking of errors, you should probably go through everything you have posted and make some corrections. You might also want to get an editor, proofreader, or both.

8080844 new art is MUCH better

8081583 Ok.
8081788 Ok, thank you! Would you like to proofread?
8081990 I know, right?

8082106 I'm not sure I'd be a good choice, you want your proofreader to be someone you are comfortable with reading your unfinished work, I just recently started started reading your work.

8082128 I am comfortable with reading my work, but if you aren't ok with it, then ok.

8082159 Besides there's, there's also groups on FiM Fiction for that

Quick question, did you mean to title the chapter 'Starting the Experiments'? Because if so, you missed a word "Staring the Experiments" doesn't make sense without some sort of context.

Does Silent Learner also have The Stare? Because imagining Twilight with access to that is scary.

8090926 it kind of is. As is imagining Fluttershy with all the magical might and knowledge Twilight possesses, actually does Silently learner have magical capability since she's a combination of two ponies?

8090942 She has a horn, so I would hope so.

8090950 I meant to ask if she has more magical capability.

8090955 Oh, not sure then. She can apparently talk to and understand animals, so that is a good thing.

8090955
8090978 Ok, very good points. I will have to remember all that.

persuaded Angle to eat everything

Once again, you misspelled the Rabbit's name. At this point, I'm half expecting Angel to make an appearance as Sgt. Nicholas Angel for at least one scene. Just to reiterate, the rabbit's name is Angel, not "Angle"

It's still a fun read, but you probably should have had someone do some last bit of proofreading before posting the chapter. It's almost never a good sign when there's at least one error in the first paragraph.

8097652 Thank you. That always gets me for some reason. Angel and Angle. Again, thanks.

8097659 No prob, found a few others while reading but the fist one I spotted was that. And now that I think about it, Angel dressed as the main protagonist of Hot Fuzz does seem a bit in character for him, I can just imagine him commissioning Rarity for the outfit only to be wearing it when Silent Learner returns home.

8097670 A parody movie, and one of the better ones in my opinion. Here's a trailer

, it's been a few years since the movie came out so you can find it for rental to go and check out. One of the jokes in the film, at least for a while, is that the newspaper keeps getting his name his name wrong by calling him "Angle" instead of Angel, seeing as Angel is literally his last name and he was moved to the town for plot reasons, take it as you will.

8097677 And Angel is which one again?

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