8080346 you could also ask if anyone is artistically inclined ask one of those people to do the piece, I'm sure some folks would welcome the chance for practice.
8080886 I don't think (s)he on devientart? But I do know the link to Hereand do you wanted you can also ask for fusion of rainbow and applejack after this story too.
An error in the first sentence is usually not a good sign
Twilight nocked on Fluttershy's door.
I think that was supposed to be "Twilight knocked on Fluttershy's door." You might want to get Grammarly to help you out, it's free to download and it has additional addons that can be applied to web browsers to provide that extra writing help during posting and talking to others online.
You probably should have to wait a bit before you posted this, obvious errors in the first paragraph are never a in the first paragraph are never a good sign.
8081173 Someone under the username of silivak had made a challenge using that picture. Howeve, for the moment, I am going to have to take this story off the cite. You know, for editing and what not.
I'm pretty sure you meant to say Angel, last I checked this wasn't the paper from Hot Fuzz. Speaking of errors, you should probably go through everything you have posted and make some corrections. You might also want to get an editor, proofreader, or both.
8082106 I'm not sure I'd be a good choice, you want your proofreader to be someone you are comfortable with reading your unfinished work, I just recently started started reading your work.
AUgh what is that cover pic
8080321 That was my attempt at drawing Silent Learner. Obviously, it needs work.
8080346 you could also ask if anyone is artistically inclined ask one of those people to do the piece,
I'm sure some folks would welcome the chance for practice.
8080386 Actually, someone just asked.
8080507 no offense but that sounds like a much better idea
8080815 I know. Usually I do better than that, but I totally deped on this one.
8080844 why'd not ask Senseidezzy to make Silent Learner for you just like (s)he did for you Dainty Pleasure.
8080852 That's who drew her? I saw it in a group challenge by Silvak.
8080855 the name artist that fusion of rarity and pinkie, long with fusion of twilight/trixie and rainbow/pinkie.
8080882 Awesome. Can I find her or him on devientart?
8080886 I don't think (s)he on devientart? But I do know the link to Here and do you wanted you can also ask for fusion of rainbow and applejack after this story too.
8080898 Awesome! Thanks! That Trixie/Twilight and Pinkie/Rainbow Dash fusion picture is adorable!
8080943 thank so are you already ask senseidezzy for you request?
8080952 I already almost have one. The person who wanted to draw her is almost done.
8080971 almost done? Wow that was fast! And your other request?
An error in the first sentence is usually not a good sign
I think that was supposed to be "Twilight knocked on Fluttershy's door." You might want to get Grammarly to help you out, it's free to download and it has additional addons that can be applied to web browsers to provide that extra writing help during posting and talking to others online.
You probably should have to wait a bit before you posted this, obvious errors in the first paragraph are never a in the first paragraph are never a good sign.
8081007 Yeah, I probably should have. Stupid excitement.
8080995 I only had that one request.
8081034 the first one?
8081050 I didn't request that one, that was part of a challenge.
8081117 right
8081142 Now I'm slightly confuse. Was that it?
8081161 no and what challenge?
8081173 Someone under the username of silivak had made a challenge using that picture. Howeve, for the moment, I am going to have to take this story off the cite. You know, for editing and what not.
8081205 right...
Wait a minute... is that your new cover for this?
8081220 Yes. Do you like it?
8081526 ahh nope.
8081544 The picture or the story?
8081562 the pictures.
I'm pretty sure you meant to say Angel, last I checked this wasn't the paper from Hot Fuzz. Speaking of errors, you should probably go through everything you have posted and make some corrections. You might also want to get an editor, proofreader, or both.
8080844 new art is MUCH better
8081583 Ok.
8081788 Ok, thank you! Would you like to proofread?
8081990 I know, right?
8082106 I'm not sure I'd be a good choice, you want your proofreader to be someone you are comfortable with reading your unfinished work, I just recently started started reading your work.
8082128 I am comfortable with reading my work, but if you aren't ok with it, then ok.
8082159 Besides there's, there's also groups on FiM Fiction for that
8082813 Ok, thanks.
Finally I decided to read this fic