Ahhh. Okay. Major update complete save some editing for the now Chapter 10. That will have to come later. Anyway...

So for everyone paying attention still, This is the Official Edit for this story and things will not be changing again. If you have already read past the changes, don't think anything of it as the story is basically the same. This was for the express purpose of fixing some issues that I had with both my writing and plot presentation. The new version accomplishes the task of telling the story and describing characters with a significantly improved flow and function within this version of Pony. I desperately wanted the characters to have more depth and well-roundedness as well as provide contrast against the show characters of Celestia and Luna. This was incredibly important for the overall function of the story and where things are headed, given that the majority of the material is character-driven not event driven, at least that is what I am intending.

Enjoy! -Mird-