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haha! Done! no more re-editing for me!
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Well I can't rate it teen, we say fuck a whole lot after act 1! and there will be loads of other nefarious deeds as well. lol. And who is red and black?? WHO?? lmao.
Yes I understand the stipulations. That's why I'm trying to advertise. My friend Custos has done an excellent job of helping.
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I'm sorry you feel that way. Also, I'm guilty, I have not yet gotten the very...amateur MS paint image and vectors that I made turned into a actual piece of art that better shows the characters, I'm not exactly an artist! Thanks for all the informative advice!
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Ah yes. It would seem that a number of my fears are confirmed. That its is only really a good story in my head. You have hit some key points that I have been looking to get some real feedback on. Such as: Is this something other people can enjoy? Is some of the more dynamic characterization making sense? Are people really gonna understand how these character's act without me dropping huge amounts of exposition and prologue before trying to make them do things? Is it worth my time to carefully detail events and make them worth the read?
It would seem the answer to most of these questions is No.
If you would be willing to indulge me I would like to send you a conjecture about WHY our two main characters act the way they do Send me a PM or respond here and I'll start the conversation.
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I'll get back to you after I update my story. Speaking of which, mind giving your own opinions on my story? It doesn't have that much feedback either, but I will say that I'm quite proud of it up to this point as well as the fact of its readership upkeep, with last chapter having 75% views of the first (the 2nd one is super wierd though, only has half the views for some reason.) And I said I'm asking for feedback, but I'm likely not going to change how I write the story. I have specific goals and events in mind already and I'm quite happy with the writing style I've built up for it. It's a selfish story of sorts, something I'm using to understand myself introspectively. The reason I'm asking for feedback is mainly because it doesn't have many comments, and that issue is fairly superficial.
But you are disinterested for any reason, don't force yourself to read. Again I will get back to your story sometime after updating.
-Blankscape
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Gladly. Frankly I have been doing tons of writing, And have made some decisions that will require me to make significant structural changes to what I am doing with min. And...I would HAPPILY procrastinate that. At least for the time being! Look forward to reading. Hope to either confirm or deny your collective fears!