Leaving Crystal Prep meant turning her back on all sorts of college money, but Sci-Twi is a smart girl with a smart solution: start working at a local glory hole.
She was sure the princesses were nice enough, but...what teenage girl wanted to spend a week hanging out with a bunch of older women that were actually polymorphed horse princesses?
Oh yeh of little faith, do not underestimate the immortal and eternally young rulers of the pony world. You're in for a treat, that's for sure.
Damn, I'd get hot and bothered too with how much money she's looking at. Let's say it's a month long vacation, and the princesses ate willing to pay, let's say, two thousand bits. Obviously that'd be almost slave labor in equestria, a personal guide and whore for an entire monthb for what's likely peanuts to them. Two thousand 10 gram gold coins. Twenty kilograms of moolah of the highest grade. That's not "college money", that's $1,000,000 and change worth of retirement fund, invested all at once.
So either SciTwi actually had multiple orgasms during that conversation or the sisters are severely underpaying her in pony terms.
I won't deny I expected some Twiggles on Twiggles action, but this was hilarious and promises a lot. Although knowing that even her friends don't care enough to bring her to orgasm too is kinda sad
10099290 assuming the coins are pure gold, of course. but even if it's just gold plated, that's still an obscene amount of cash. and she mentioned gems, too, which could be just as big a deal given their utter lack of rarity in Equestria.
10103967 Indeed, specially when that's the absolute lowest bound. With the extras I bet she'll make at least a couple million - enough to get her and her lover through college with enough remaining to get a house and seed her Mad Scientist efforts after it.
Hmm, I wonder, will Sugarcoat and her become just sluts once they've got "enough"? Will they forsake the ways of whoring in the name of pleasure and actually enjoying it? Because WhoreTwi admitting she rarely gets there even while liking it was really, really sad
Hey Drace, I totally get this is a popular story, but I do hope you know it's coming to a conclusion. I have seen way too many authors get out of control and keep going. After this whole shebang (lol) with Celly and Luna, I do hope you'll move on to another story, because this is the last sex point where anything else would hurt the story.
10104384 And as a person who has done commish elsewhere I know that you have the choice as the author to stop. Your job as the artist/author/whoever is to use your skills and talents to give people what they want, but also for it to be high quality, and sometimes to shut ideas down. I've told my guests multiple times "Yeah that sounds hot but it doesn't make sense so how about we do X that is similar?", and that's common af in this and multiple other industries.
So yes, he can tell the commissioner "Hey we are hitting the max amount of content for the story. If we do more not only will the story be bloated, but we're scraping the bottom of the barrel here."
Which he is if he goes past Celly and Luna, because right now is the climax of the fic. The biggest score for the biggest whore. Even a huge mega-orgy seems like it would just be dragging out the story and should only be used as an epilogue.
Like Twilight over and over has mentioned she never really gets off. If he was to do a final orgy, she has to have been accepted into college and quit whoring. Then he friends invite her to an orgy and they do their best to make her cum so many times she passes out. That would be the only real sex scene after this that would bring new content to the story that doesn't seem used and recycled.
It's a problem is clop authors have. Enough sex to get you horny, but not too much that it kills arousal.
Just to detail my thought process when it comes to situations like this. I base my decisions on whether or not to continue a story on two factors: my enjoyment for writing the story and my relationship with the client. I enjoy writing this story. I also have a positive relationship with the client - they've supported both my fandom and original works, are understanding if I have delays, and give me ideas that are compelling to write. Those are all exceedingly rare things to have.
Respectfully, I'm much more concerned with making them happy than whether or not someone that doesn't even follow me thinks a story is overstaying its welcome.
“I’m afraid Sunset Shimmer’s referral doesn’t give her a bonus. She...lost her referral bonus privileges when she sent Ditzy Doo our way, and she tried to put a muffin in my pussy.”
Twilight looked over her shoulder to see the princess frozen in place, wide-eyed, and holding the contract with a white-knuckled grip. She was practically hyperventilating, her cheeks overtaken with a massive blush, and a small squeaking noise escaped from her throat like the sound of a balloon running out of air.
Maybe the two Twilights were plenty different, after all.
Nice work
DISSSSAPOINTEEEEEDDDDD
Oh yeh of little faith, do not underestimate the immortal and eternally young rulers of the pony world. You're in for a treat, that's for sure.
Damn, I'd get hot and bothered too with how much money she's looking at. Let's say it's a month long vacation, and the princesses ate willing to pay, let's say, two thousand bits. Obviously that'd be almost slave labor in equestria, a personal guide and whore for an entire monthb for what's likely peanuts to them.
Two thousand 10 gram gold coins. Twenty kilograms of moolah of the highest grade. That's not "college money", that's $1,000,000 and change worth of retirement fund, invested all at once.
So either SciTwi actually had multiple orgasms during that conversation or the sisters are severely underpaying her in pony terms.
I won't deny I expected some Twiggles on Twiggles action, but this was hilarious and promises a lot. Although knowing that even her friends don't care enough to bring her to orgasm too is kinda sad
A girl after my own heart.
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assuming the coins are pure gold, of course. but even if it's just gold plated, that's still an obscene amount of cash. and she mentioned gems, too, which could be just as big a deal given their utter lack of rarity in Equestria.
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Indeed, specially when that's the absolute lowest bound. With the extras I bet she'll make at least a couple million - enough to get her and her lover through college with enough remaining to get a house and seed her Mad Scientist efforts after it.
Hmm, I wonder, will Sugarcoat and her become just sluts once they've got "enough"? Will they forsake the ways of whoring in the name of pleasure and actually enjoying it? Because WhoreTwi admitting she rarely gets there even while liking it was really, really sad
Hey Drace, I totally get this is a popular story, but I do hope you know it's coming to a conclusion. I have seen way too many authors get out of control and keep going. After this whole shebang (lol) with Celly and Luna, I do hope you'll move on to another story, because this is the last sex point where anything else would hurt the story.
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Drace writes on commission so it’s really up to whoever’s paying them to write this story.
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And as a person who has done commish elsewhere I know that you have the choice as the author to stop. Your job as the artist/author/whoever is to use your skills and talents to give people what they want, but also for it to be high quality, and sometimes to shut ideas down. I've told my guests multiple times "Yeah that sounds hot but it doesn't make sense so how about we do X that is similar?", and that's common af in this and multiple other industries.
So yes, he can tell the commissioner "Hey we are hitting the max amount of content for the story. If we do more not only will the story be bloated, but we're scraping the bottom of the barrel here."
Which he is if he goes past Celly and Luna, because right now is the climax of the fic. The biggest score for the biggest whore. Even a huge mega-orgy seems like it would just be dragging out the story and should only be used as an epilogue.
Like Twilight over and over has mentioned she never really gets off. If he was to do a final orgy, she has to have been accepted into college and quit whoring. Then he friends invite her to an orgy and they do their best to make her cum so many times she passes out. That would be the only real sex scene after this that would bring new content to the story that doesn't seem used and recycled.
It's a problem is clop authors have. Enough sex to get you horny, but not too much that it kills arousal.
10104384
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Just to detail my thought process when it comes to situations like this. I base my decisions on whether or not to continue a story on two factors: my enjoyment for writing the story and my relationship with the client. I enjoy writing this story. I also have a positive relationship with the client - they've supported both my fandom and original works, are understanding if I have delays, and give me ideas that are compelling to write. Those are all exceedingly rare things to have.
Respectfully, I'm much more concerned with making them happy than whether or not someone that doesn't even follow me thinks a story is overstaying its welcome.
Good way to end the chapter.