Nobody expects the Alpha Legion! The only Legion that can 'ninja' Space Marines. As another 40k Chaos fan, I'll be keeping an eye on this :)
Other thing, is that Alpharius was also the name of the Primarch of the Alpha Legion(who might be dead, or not. No-one knows) would be an interesting point twist ;)
If you haven't, I suggest reading the novel 'Legion' by Dan Abnett, concerns the Legions 'fall' to chaos.
1052064 I've recently bought the book, after finishing reading the Night Lord series. I'm still trying to get as much data from the book as I can. Thanks for the comment
Ummm.... which Alpha Legion are we talking about here?
An interesting premise, but I'd take it to Ponychan's /fic/ board and submit it there so they can help with your gammar issues.
Also, it so far doesn't seem Alpha Legion-y to me so much as Black Legion-y, but of course it is only the prologue.
Looks nice, save for the grammar issues that make it hard to read.
Nobody expects the Alpha Legion! The only Legion that can 'ninja' Space Marines. As another 40k Chaos fan, I'll be keeping an eye on this :)
Other thing, is that Alpharius was also the name of the Primarch of the Alpha Legion(who might be dead, or not. No-one knows) would be an interesting point twist ;)
If you haven't, I suggest reading the novel 'Legion' by Dan Abnett, concerns the Legions 'fall' to chaos.
1052064 I've recently bought the book, after finishing reading the Night Lord series. I'm still trying to get as much data from the book as I can. Thanks for the comment
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You got me curious good sir!
"the screams of the Warp"
Capital 'T' please.
1271866 Fixed
thanks for the heads up
The Alpha legion doesn't worship Chaos, silly.
They just pretend to, secretly they're loyal servants of The Emperor.
I am going to have to read this. I love the warhamme 40k universe!