Well Here's chapter 2, took forever right? Well I've been busy and in two day i've got a singing concert with my chorus group and then there's the wedding (not mine). There's also College Applications to fill out. I'm still working on chapter 3 Chapter 2 itself have been done 2~3 or 4 months ago. I wanted to finish chapter 3 before posting, but seeing how long it'll be before I finish chapter 3. So here's an early christmas present I guess. Happy Decemeber
BTW the names Katy and Stacy was from a request from two classmates that saw me typing in class and wanted to be in the story. they didn't care that their character could be murdered..w/e
foolish twilight,there's a reason that the imperium doesn't let us read books like that!
also,I've noticed that tezeench sucks a lot of people into the warp and dumps them in equestria.....this wouldn't happen so much if twilight was running the inquisition...
2482315 actually if you think about the Dawn of War series, most of the Chaos marines in the campaign were of the Alpha Legion like Lord Bale, Carron, and the Dawn of War 2 series. though in the bigger picture they are very level headed, my belief is that most of the legion has fallen to corruption but their leaders have been smart to keep the legion alive and very effective
Edit: My belief has changed, though there are some fallen Legionnaires, Alpha Legion for the most part is still the same
Well Here's chapter 2, took forever right? Well I've been busy and in two day i've got a singing concert with my chorus group and then there's the wedding (not mine). There's also College Applications to fill out. I'm still working on chapter 3
Chapter 2 itself have been done 2~3 or 4 months ago. I wanted to finish chapter 3 before posting, but seeing how long it'll be before I finish chapter 3. So here's an early christmas present I guess.
Happy Decemeber
BTW the names Katy and Stacy was from a request from two classmates that saw me typing in class and wanted to be in the story. they didn't care that their character could be murdered..w/e
Ah, but WHICH Alpharius?
Awesome, we need more blood for the blood god, ASAP!
Update?! Hell yeah!
1781967 It could just be his name... Alas, only one primarch was called Alpharius, the other was called Omegon
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You didn't get the reference, I'm afraid.
~ WH40K wiki
1783717 I forgot that. Thank you for the reminder, and please accept my sincerest apologies.
Party for a Chaos Space Marine? Not gonna work, even for Pinkie.
1051486 No such Legion exists
Well. Check your spelling an grammar, sir. And everything else. Too much for me to put in the comments.
foolish twilight,there's a reason that the imperium doesn't let us read books like that!
also,I've noticed that tezeench sucks a lot of people into the warp and dumps them in equestria.....this wouldn't happen so much if twilight was running the inquisition...
2482315 actually if you think about the Dawn of War series, most of the Chaos marines in the campaign were of the Alpha Legion like Lord Bale, Carron, and the Dawn of War 2 series. though in the bigger picture they are very level headed, my belief is that most of the legion has fallen to corruption but their leaders have been smart to keep the legion alive and very effective
Edit: My belief has changed, though there are some fallen Legionnaires, Alpha Legion for the most part is still the same
The Alpha Legion doesn't have a thirst for blood, either...
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He is a Khornate. Blood for the blood god, skulls for the skull throne, remember?