You..I...this...I don't even..what....I thought I was dirty but I never even expected this. Oh my.

You know what, I'm not even going to criticize the content of this story, because it's my own bucking fault for even opening it, so bloody well done on peaking my morbid curiosity.

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My morbid curiosity made sure I fav'd it cause dag nabbit now I need to know what happens. And honestly, this story could have been a lot worse.

I don't find this disturbing. I find it...ah...erm....vagina stifficle.

You mixed up past and present tense a few times :l

Not bad.

i.imgur.com/mGQv1.jpg

I like this story. I don't know what the rest of you are on about.

The worst part? The spelling is excellent and the grammar is spot-on. thedirtyponyfellow is a decent writer... and he squanders that skill on this.

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Honestly? There are stories on the site with humans showing up to diddle the ponies. Really, thinking about it, I'm actually kinda surprised we don't see more pony/animal fics.

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I like to think our illustrious clop-authors have at least a few morals...

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The question then is...should they still apply if it comes to Human/pony? Because it's essentially the same thing.

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The world would be a lot better off without people like you, Sorren. Take your own advice.

859689

Wait, so, bestiality is okay... but for a non-humanoid sentient animal to have sex with a non-humanoid feral animal is suddenly against any sense of morality? You need to get your head on straight.

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Well, I can't say I've read any high-quality human/pony clops but I also haven't been looking for them. So... I dunno. I'm polarized. If it's good then maybe I can get behind it. But I doubt I'd be able to get through the entire story to decide if it's good.

859705
I don't recall saying bestiality was OK...

859698
Ah, I wish you could like comments.
Or at least in Sorren's case, report then. >_>

Got to love equestria the land where a childs rumour leads to arrests without investigation.

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He didn't say it was ok, I was merely questioning on that aspect. Perhaps I could have phrased better.
I'd almost put money on many dislikes coming from those who may have no issue with Pony/human clop.

Though to be quite honest, I have a hard time seeing this as a clop and more using the sex as a plot device. But that's just me.

And I still cant' believe I never saw Applenona coming. <_<

859711

You made no negative response specifically towards Licorice's "but there's human on pony stories all over the place", yet your reply was about the morality of authors, when the main subject of Licorice's post was the fact that it's surprising we don't see more pony-on-feral stories. If you didn't understand exactly what it was you were replying to, then I suppose that's fine.

All the same, it's not about a sense of morals. It's about whether or not you like something. Don't dress it up to sound like some level of "common sense" or "ethics" when it's just your personal opinion on what someone else likes. There's enough arrogant twats out there like that already who truly believe that what they like is the measure for what's right or wrong for everyone else. I ask you not follow in their damnable footsteps.

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Yes, we need something akin to a report feature, or a vote-down feature to hide frankly nigh-illegal comments such as that. No one needs to be subjected to all the pointless hatred of an immature and ignorant brat who doesn't understand anyone but themselves. Sorren's just one of hundreds I have to rail at because people let them do whatever they like and hurt whoever they want.

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In fact my comment had nothing to do with common sense, morality, ethics, or even a basic sense of decency. I was making a snarky, pointless comment that I must say I didn't expect to be over-analyzed.

So... kudos!

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859713

Sure the story is written well. But jees, I've only seen a few of these, and I really don't think it's... words dont fit.

bad. Written well, but bad.

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Thinking something is written bad, or the subject itself is displeasing to you is fine. Offer criticism, or just walk away. Be mature and sensible. But suggesting the author kill themselves? You go much too far you little ingrate. It takes someone without a solid concept of life and death to so carelessly throw around such demeaning suggestions with an utter lack of reason or conviction. Essentially; grow up.

859749 It was a youtube link. It was meant for humerous purposes, that you seemed to take way too litterally.

859744
That's no reason to tell the author to go die.

Have you ever read VC Andrews? She's a VERY famous, popularly-read author. Pretty much ALL of her stories contain the rape of minors. This is a majorly published author we're talking about.

So the story doesn't meet your likes. Fine, you don't like it. What, do you sent links to youtube vids telling people to die when you see an article you don't like in the paper?

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Of course it was. I say that with all the sarcasm you can't hear. Because suggesting the author kill themselves, even indirectly with a video without adding any sort of clarification is -obviously hilarious- and must be the right thing to do. In fact, since I'm still letting everything drip with obvious sarcasm, you're even in the right to defend such a post rather than admitting perhaps you either made a mistake or are in fact just another little troll. If the former, I suggest you fix it to prevent further issues, before the author sees it. What sort of writer wants to see that when they put a story up? How big of an asshole does someone have to be to think it's funny to be that abrasively discourteous and unhelpful towards someone who did nothing to deserve it?

Do you even think before you do things?

859766 Gah! I didn't mean to start a war! Since a pony fills the space of an inteligent bieng, and Winona, is still Winona. This falls under beastiality, which in nicer terms is, "poopykaka."

I can understand clop. Hell, I've written one, but, meh.

859759

There. Thank you for removing the most offensive video. The one above it, while abrasive and negative, is much more acceptable. I return you to your regularly-scheduled night.

859782 Close the box of bitch flakes and stop with the offensive. You do realize the tolerance of clop authors, right?

I know the post was harsh, and that's why I removed it. But damn, you don't have to go throwing a tempurtantrum and stomping your feet because you didn't like my comment.

859786
Alright, so then I absolutely must ask you this:
What about Human in Equestria diddles with pony?
What if Winona talks?
What if dogs actually could talk, but Winona is mute?
What if Applejack diddled a pony that couldn't talk?
What if Applejack diddled the Cutie Mark Crusaders?

And yes, there's a method to my 'madness'.

859801 All of which would be different scenarios. In this case, Winona is a dog, and nothing more.

guys guys, I'm not an hero...

I respect the opinions of others, and to be quite honest, i've seen enough shit in my life to stop giving a single fuck about what others think about me.

If you think human/pony is fine, but pony/dog is wrong, that's absolutely fine. I'd severely disagree with you. I won't go into any specific details about my feelings about beastiality, but based on the story, I think you'd see me standpoint.

If you wanna read the rest, cool, read it, if not, don't. I don't care.

I do appreciate the fact that you all think I'm a good writer, being as this story plopped out of my head in about 2 hours, starting around 4 AM.

-TDPF

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But not really. Humans are humans and ponies are animals. Saying that's ok is saying it's ok if a human is sleeping with an ape because the ape knows sign and can communicate properly. Simply making a point. If human/pony is ok, really, pony/animal is not that far off, and a lot closer than human/pony.

Basically, everyone's cup of tea is different. Some like sugar, some like plain. Others like bitter. Some prefer coffee with honey. When it's words on a screen, nothing makes it wrong or right.

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Don't get defensive. I wasn't the one who thought it'd be funny to suggest suicide. If you're going to be immature, don't blame other people for your incompetence, stunted emotional growth, and grave mental issues. If you were sensible you'd be apologetic. Granted, if you were half that I wouldn't have felt the need to put my foot up your ass in the first place. So, rather than trying to make me sound like some crazed nut in place of yourself, at least -try- to take it as a learning experience when you cause someone to feel the need to have to get onto you. Review what they said you did wrong, see in yourself why you would do something like that, and maybe... I don't know, try to learn from the problems? I'd say something corny like that's 'what a mature adult would do', but there's not even too many of those... all that aside, again, thank you for realizing the problem you presented and correcting it. Now, let that be the end of it. I have more people to go deal with who are actual assholes rather than someone who made a mistake that they were nice enough to fix when pointed out, such as yourself. Take care.

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Haha, you sound like me. That's basically what happened with my fics too. Again, I'm very curious to see where this goes. My poor Applejack!

859838 It's the damned internet! I can do whatever the FUCK I want. And anyone who actually lets what people on the internet in a commetns setion say affect them, and/or drive them to suicide, is an idiot. So please, go find somepony else to start an hour arguement with over a comment you didn't like on a story and leave me alone. I have better things to do than argue with a person who restates what they said in the previous comment in a different way three different times.

859838 and you my friend are still around the age of 13 I'm guessing and I'm guessing you clop and it's not good for kids to clop you know

859838 weknowmemes.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/watch-out-we-got-a-badass-over-here-meme.png I can't even verify how much of a disappointment you are

Um....a story involving a very taboo subject and starting a war of morals in the comments? Count me in!

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Getting involved in a discussion, or argument, that doesn't concern you? Settling in with poorly thought-out comments that say little and mean nothing? Yet you still have the gall to attempt insults against someone who's said absolutely nothing to you... I'm not going to bother with this. Sorren, as much as I dislike their sort, could hold a much more intelligent argument than you even seem capable of. Effectively said, you aren't worth the time it'd take to try and get through your skull just how much of a dunce you are and why you need to spend time considering just how immature of a person it takes to attempt this.

I'll say it again. Let that be the end of it, I'm dealing with far more loquacious and severe persons than yourself and do not need the distraction. Clean up your act, grow up some.

859921 I love how you refer to me as a dunce you brainless imbecile I know much more than you could possibly imagine if you want an intelligent argument you have come to me first of all I do that because I don't like to waste time on half-wits like yourself

859921 your to incompetent to come back with a proper insult just the precise fact I don't deal with half-wits who don't even contain half the knowledge I have

859921 and with that I bid you farewell

859858 why do people find your criticism offensive? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png

this is the internet for fuck sakes you dont take death threats for real at all dumb people

859970 *rainbowshrug* I don't know, but it's annoying as all hell.

Jesus man, I click on a story and get 75% of the comments being in some sort of a fight that I think everyone lost the original objective of the fight 335678294y7 comments ago. It's a story, leave your comment and STFU.

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eh wasnt terrible, just weird, I dont mean the animal sex part, just like the story line, it's different for me. Also, re-read this chapter, I saw 3 errors in the first paragraph alone, that stuff drives me crazy man.

Hehehe...hahaHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA FUCK THAT IS JUST HILARIOUS!! OH MAN, IF ONLY THERE WAS AN EMOTICON FOR MANIACAL LAUGHTER!! What makes me laugh is that even though the quality of the writing is awesome, people won't read it just because of the bestiality. And then others will recognize the good writing and, because they don't want to feel closed minded and stupid, will keep reading even if it just seems awkward! Oh man, so many psychological conflicts will arise from this fic. Congratulations.