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Thanks, and I am going to proofread and edit eventually

7918536 even if it needs proofreading it is much better done then ,many other stories I've read, this seems like you were actually focused on the spelling and not just spurting out your ideas onto a page, more people need to slow down like this

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Thanks, and i decided to at least spell check it before publishing because so many stories suffer on it, and because my tablet keeps autocorrecting the more "unusual" words to stuff that makes no sense. BTW The only reason twilight isn't banished is because, of how the public sees her, she's a princess, and they would see her as infallible and if word got out it could cause protest and maybe violent actions, and because, another missing person report isn't much, if she for instance kidnapped a governor, or some high ranking official, she would be in deep shit.

Well that was interesting.