John Williams with his team and a handful of scientists is sent to a planet to investigate a claim that the planet has life,come with us to see if its true
Alright I think I'm going to resume the story, now I can see that you guys are holding back against your criticism, please tell me what's wrong with it. I want to see what u see about my story, like does it lack details or grammar. Just tell me okay.
8038071 thank you finally someone who really know what to be done on my story
I forgot to save ahhh noooooooooooooo that's it I'm taking a brake
Heh I don't know what went wrong with my story...maybe I should...shut it down.
Alright I think I'm going to resume the story, now I can see that you guys are holding back against your criticism, please tell me what's wrong with it. I want to see what u see about my story, like does it lack details or grammar. Just tell me okay.
"Kiss me off"
XD
wat?!
I'm choking
LOLOLLOLOLOL
A FILLY/CHILD IN HEAT?! THAT RIDICULES XD!!
unless that's how it really is in Equestria? Dayum,this is a weird part of the story XD