still good so far.

"Stripes, do you know what 'Heel' means? Be honest, I won't punish honestly."

honesty

and suddenly realized it was because she was leaning so hard into Fluttershy's rubbing of her hear that she threatened to topple over.

'ear' or 'there' not sure, either works?
Something tells me he wasn't really going to clip her primaries (used to do that with our chooks when we had them in my youth.) it was a test to see if she'd bark, he knew she would. Wasn't sure how I felt from chapter 1, locking your pet in a basement? (hope she was in reach of at least a chamber pot?) But this chapter seems to have cleared my anxieties for her. Stripes likes her role-play more than she expected.

Fluttershy, do you have ulterior motive for wanting to wash Stripes?

7768447 Thanks, got all the fixes for both chapters. The commissioner decided they wanted more, and had paid not only for the second chapter, but a third. That will be coming over the next few days, I have a particular SciTwi and her study buddy to finish before then.

im going to give a guess by the end of this story-- she'll be all his.

7768845 I don't think Dash could ever completely give in. But there will be events that bind them a little closer.

7768863 I see.