The story of a unicorn who was born... wrong....
starting out really nice cant wait for the rest ^^
This could be good
Nice opening chapter hope their is more to come
Interested to see where this goes
maaaaybe try for another name?'Pitch Black' feels like the 'black and red alicorn OC' equivalent for evil names.
7760506 That's why it's okay, he's not evil. As such it doesn't count.
7760506 I though Lichlord18 was going to go with dark horizon or something meaning a gray area or necessary evil.
7760571 you're sure not waiting to use that dark
7761803 Bad things are going to happen. Little Pitch's life will not have a happy beginning, though it might have a happy ending... not to mention, you know, shambling corpses and stuff...
7761903 what do you think of the name of dark horizon? would you use it in your story?
7762088 Maybe, but probably not for a main character.
Just went ahead and added you to Nercomancy group :)
I like it, and I really look forward to whatever you've got planned next.
Need new chapter. It has been a year
8578069...You do realize that not only has this been on hiatus for about a year, but I just started a rewrite yesterday, right?
A bit heavy with narration and a little to fast paced on the dialogue side, but other than that, it seems promising.
starting out really nice cant wait for the rest ^^
This could be good
Nice opening chapter hope their is more to come
Interested to see where this goes
maaaaybe try for another name?
'Pitch Black' feels like the 'black and red alicorn OC' equivalent for evil names.
7760506 That's why it's okay, he's not evil. As such it doesn't count.
7760506
I though Lichlord18 was going to go with dark horizon or something meaning a gray area or necessary evil.
7760571
you're sure not waiting to use that dark
7761803 Bad things are going to happen. Little Pitch's life will not have a happy beginning, though it might have a happy ending... not to mention, you know, shambling corpses and stuff...
7761903 what do you think of the name of dark horizon? would you use it in your story?
7762088 Maybe, but probably not for a main character.
Just went ahead and added you to Nercomancy group :)
I like it, and I really look forward to whatever you've got planned next.
Need new chapter. It has been a year
8578069
...You do realize that not only has this been on hiatus for about a year, but I just started a rewrite yesterday, right?
A bit heavy with narration and a little to fast paced on the dialogue side, but other than that, it seems promising.