300 years ago, humanity wiped itself out, leaving behind a single nano-enhanced soldier. Suicidal, dangerous and no longer human, he ends up in Equestria, just when something big is about to go down - can one freaky guy, make a difference?
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seeing as there was no comment this is juan now
hi
I'm just gonna pretend there was a perception filter of some sort.
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I'm afraid I don't understand... would you care to elaborate what you meant?
While I love the crossover, reading the story pains me due to the spelling and grammar errors, among other things. A lot of other things.
I'm still going to read it though, since I kind of like it.
8763708
Um, that story is not a crossover I used the picture of Prophet because that’s the closest thing I could find that would resemble, how I imagine the human OC would look like. And while I won’t deny his appearance was inspired by nano-suit (among other things), his technology is actually a mixture of tech from various sci-fi shows.
I know, and I'm sorry about it - this was written before I found out about Grammarly or a proofreader... I plan to fix it one day but... other stuff just keep popping in. And, as you noticed there are ‘other things’ (too much telling, inconsistent story, plot holes, etc.), frankly that story could use a whole rewrite - and not only from technical POV…
Remove first comma,
regained consciousness
Hmm this would be better removed.
front would be better.
again front would be better.
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