8090717 Good news, I tried it again and I think I got a decent enough Trixie chapter. I hope it isn't a big letdown to you. At least no one else is likely to read it and criticize its quality cause it's a new chapter in an existing story, and you already thought the Starlight chapter was good.
It's published now, so you can read it.
Comment posted by Redfish3000 deleted Apr 13th, 2017
I don't know what that deleted comment said but it must have been pretty bad for the mods to delete it. And my chapter must have been pretty bad for you to react that way when you loved the story so much. Sorry I let you down, and I'll unpublish the chapter. No hard feelings
8091806 Great! I really liked this one! You did a very good job with this one. It's not a letdown at all, I actually enjoyed it very much. I specially like how you now describe how the need to pee gets greater as the time passes, and you mention how Trixie crosses her legs, does pee dance and other things tryig to keep her bladder in control. At least for me, the best part of these stories is when the character gets more and more desperate as time passes. For me, it's the best part. And you did it very well in this one. Good job.
8092765 It's not a bad comment. It was actually one that I wrote when I read you hadn't been able to think of anything for the Trixie chapter. I actually deleted the comment myself when I discovered you did actually make the chapter. It's a great chapter! I should have finished reading all the comments before writing one myself, so it was my fault. Don't worry, you're doing a great job!
8092802 Yeah, it's actually unlike me. Even if I don't like something, I wouldn't say anything too bad about it. In the worst scenario, I'd just say it was "ok" or something like that, but I'd never be mean for that. Plus, you've been doing great. Maybe I'm getting too optmistic, but I just can't help it, this is what I've been looking for. Great job, and keep doing more of these stories, I love them!
8092816 Well, I'm glad that I'm helping with your confidence. And about other chapters, I don't know what might be your next idea, but I'm looking forward to read it.
8090717 Good news, I tried it again and I think I got a decent enough Trixie chapter. I hope it isn't a big letdown to you. At least no one else is likely to read it and criticize its quality cause it's a new chapter in an existing story, and you already thought the Starlight chapter was good.
It's published now, so you can read it.
I don't know what that deleted comment said but it must have been pretty bad for the mods to delete it. And my chapter must have been pretty bad for you to react that way when you loved the story so much. Sorry I let you down, and I'll unpublish the chapter. No hard feelings
8091806 Great! I really liked this one! You did a very good job with this one. It's not a letdown at all, I actually enjoyed it very much. I specially like how you now describe how the need to pee gets greater as the time passes, and you mention how Trixie crosses her legs, does pee dance and other things tryig to keep her bladder in control. At least for me, the best part of these stories is when the character gets more and more desperate as time passes. For me, it's the best part. And you did it very well in this one. Good job.
8092780 So you did like it. That's good. Re-published!
Then what was with that deleted comment?
8092765 It's not a bad comment. It was actually one that I wrote when I read you hadn't been able to think of anything for the Trixie chapter. I actually deleted the comment myself when I discovered you did actually make the chapter. It's a great chapter! I should have finished reading all the comments before writing one myself, so it was my fault. Don't worry, you're doing a great job!
8092796 Ah, I see. Plus I thought a bad comment seemed really unlike you. Like I said I'm not very confident. Sorry for jumping to conclusions
8092802 Yeah, it's actually unlike me. Even if I don't like something, I wouldn't say anything too bad about it. In the worst scenario, I'd just say it was "ok" or something like that, but I'd never be mean for that. Plus, you've been doing great. Maybe I'm getting too optmistic, but I just can't help it, this is what I've been looking for. Great job, and keep doing more of these stories, I love them!
8092810 I'm not sure how many more I'll do, besides the one you requested, but you are helping with my confidence
8092810 If it's desperation you're into more, Aria's Revenge, Equestria Girls Misadventures, and Twilight's Desperation are all about that too.
8092816 Well, I'm glad that I'm helping with your confidence. And about other chapters, I don't know what might be your next idea, but I'm looking forward to read it.
And I'll go check out those stories too. Thanks.
How did Trixie pee for "about 40 minutes"?
8115499 Fixed. Thanks