This feels a bit too rapey for my tastes, sorry, celestia said no atleast half a dozen times.

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That is understandable.

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As a follow-up to your comment. It's kind of a delicate balance to get in this fic. It's very dubious consent (or indeed non-consent as you stated) but it's sort of a game between Luna and Celestia. If Celestia could tell Luna no, and mean it 100%, Luna would know and wouldn't have pressed the issue.

She saw the opening however, and wanted to help her sister 'relax' from a hard day of work, through ways that don't mean sleep. It turns significantly more consensual after the beginning.

> Thinks he knows which "artwork" this is based on
> Double checks
> Is correct

Oh, goody!

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I hope this one turned out to your satisfaction and you enjoyed it! You were a pleasure to work with

I'm sensing a SEQUAL ALERT/ new chapters (note if story is marked as incomplete ignore these statements however it is not therefore i have to ask when?
also I loved the story! it was better than good it was ORGASMIC even though i am a guy i have read enough clop fics i think i can safely figure out what that amounts to. <you may have to zooooooom in to read

Holy shit I'm in love.

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For now, this story is marked as complete because the details of the commission were met. However, the commissioner has expressed interest in potentially adding additional chapters in the future, so we'll see!

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So's Twi!

7717415 dang it u post somthing then realize it's completely rasist and take it down. well good job ill ad this to LONG TERM TRACKING
and prep to wait a few years then rediscover it again

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You'll be happy to know that the planning for another chapter is concluded. I'm now just waiting for Wishy to write a sequel to Gleam or Shine, then I'll commision a few short stories, and 'then' the new chapter :p

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He keeps me in the black

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I can't have my comissions interrupting with your other fun stuff, now can I? :p

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Fun for me or fun for you?

7733719 both?

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Point!

This is really well written. The descriptions are intimate, visceral, and draw you into the scene. I'm interested by Luna's willingness to share her property, even if it very much on her terms. Twilight as the switch adds complexity to the set up, and I can really imagine how all her study sessions might turn into sex scenes now the precedent has been set.

It must have been even harder for this Celestia to banish Luna in the past, which is interesting to picture - if Celestia was her slave, did she still get jealous of her, enough to be corrupted, or did events play out differently?

Wearing a collar is a very public act for somepony that has always kept her sexuality private. I wonder if anyone will notice?

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She doesn't typically wear the collar in public. At this point, at least, their relationship is mostly a secret thing. I'm guessing that they haven't always had so blatant of a petplay relationship for historical purposes, but if they had, perhaps Celestia did have the power to defeat her sister, but now that they're together again, she allows herself to explore her submissive side - the one that wants to give in, now that they're in a situation where Luna isn't a danger to all of society.

I should really mark this as incomplete. The patron wants to do another chapter :)

Update - I've changed the status of this story to 'incomplete', because the patron has confirmed that he is interested in commissioning another chapter.

So, at some point, there will be more

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Yay.

I don't usually read humanized stories (much less actually like them) but between everything else being quite relevant to my interests and it being commissioned by DbzOrDie, I decided to give it a go. And then I come back to favourite it and see that the status has changed to Incomplete, because more is on the way.

Welp, have a new follower.

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I'm not too big on humanization myself unless it's EqG, but this was fun to write and I had a good time with it. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wonder if I should thank DbzOrDie for that though

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Oh dear, you must think highly of me if it's convinced you to read humanized :p

Plz tell me there is more.

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There will be, yes.

This is one of my favorite stories. Please add more chapters.

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They're coming as soon as the commission list rolls around to it again

8095702 ok I can't wait. I love these stories.