its apple smack this time

Whoa. Lots of dislikes... People really hate the gore tag. That or they find the first chapter boring, even if it is only the start of the story. C'est la vie, life goes on. Next chapter will be up tomorrow, and I hope that this story will be completed by Halloween or close to it.

I think its that strange stallion. :V

The captain was impressed by her learning speed and assumed that’s why she was an alicorn and he was not.

she was an alicorn and he was not.

he was not.

No shit Sherlock. There is not a single male alicorn, period.